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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: Kawaii Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! ^o^ How much do I love this story?! *Gives you a cookie* Your plot is very well thought out. I hate to admit it, but it's hard to predict what's going to happen next (though, for an author, I guess that's a good thing). I am a little upset with a couple of the characterizations though. Well, Sango and Miroku's to be more specific. I know Sango isn't very trusting (given her profession and the way her family raised her, it'd be natural for her to be racist, for lack of a better term), but Miroku DOES trust Inuyasha not to hurt them in the manga as well as the anime. He's less of a monk and more of a pacifist, albeit a perverted one, because of that. I didn't think you'd actually have him doubt not only Inuyasha, but also Kagome, Shippou and Kaede's constant reassurances. And this probably sounds mean, but I think he and Koga disserved what they got. Miroku should have just known better. They know Inuyasha has never hurt Kagome when he transformed. Not to mention, Koga's instincts told him to leave and he didn't listen. I think your method is just about the only way Koga'd understand Kagome doesn't want him (though I suspect while he does care about Kagome in the manga and anime, him stating his 'claim' is more of ritual. I don't think he hates, or even really dislikes Inuyasha that much). In any case, I hope you have Inuyasha's youkai side'll react that way to Kikyou next time you have them see/run into her. That's a really good way to 'heal' his human side; get rid of the problem all together. = ) I AM glad that you're not having Kagome and Inuyasha as well as Kagura and Sesshomaru just jump into bed with each another. Nor are you having them ignore one another. While they have issues to work through and certain problems to overcome, they still acknowledge each other. I'm happy you for noticed this and wanted to thank you for that characterization. Makes them more... realistic. You know? I do have one suggestion though. You should really proof read. I know you're not American, but maybe you can get a beta that speaks English fluently? Or at least download the US/English version of Microsoft Word (or your country's equivalent). The spelling, grammar, word association and subject-verb agreement mistakes are becoming fewer in number as the chapters go on, but they're still present (i.e. you say 'especifically' and 'nonchalant' instead of 'specifically' and 'nonchalant' and '…he'd wearing…' instead of '…he's wearing…'). Other than that, I really like this story. ^o^ *claps*You should post it on www.fichaven.org when you have the chance. It's a really good fanfiction site on it's way to becoming the new (and much more organized, in my opinion) mediaminer.org. I hope you update soon~!! Til next review… *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Title: Absolutely amazing and enjoyable!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is absolutely wonderful! ^^ I just had to say that to start, hehe. I have to be honest, I started reading this fic on AFF.net and moved here because I find fics easier to read on MM.org. Anyways, I love your characterization. You keep the characters in character while adding your own unique touch to their personalities. I enjoy the way you take your time developing the Inuyasha/Kagome relationship, and I'm not just saying that because they are my favourite Inuyasha pairing. ^^ I was hooked on this story the moment I started reading it. Trust me, it's no surprise you won awards for it since the way you combine the scenery, characters, events, all of it, brings the story to life with such delicious description. Reading other fics after reading yours made me realize that sometimes authors tend to rush the relationship development and it takes away from the enjoyment of the story. You know how to make a good, stable plot and how to advance it with skill. You do a wonderful job with the limes and I can't wait to read the lemons later!! Don't worry, I'm patient. ;) hehehe. I like the direction in which eveything is going and how you leave the reader in suspense every chapter. It's a very good plot device that you take excellent advantage of. ^^ I do hope Kouga has finally learned his lesson and in that same moment I foudn Miroku to be incredibly stupid for holding Kagome back. I mean, the guy witnessed what happened in the village before when Inuyasha mindlessly attacked the barrier with him in it, lol. Poor Monk seems wise but I guess Sango sees him most clearly, the pervert houshi that never learns. :P lol. Anyways, I just wanted to make sure I let you know how much I enjoyed this fic and that I'll be continuing to read new chapters as you post them here on MM.org. Keep up the excellent work and I encourage you to keep writing no matter what other people or reviewers say. You have talent! ^^
| Reviewed By: Kitsune Hanyou On: June 25, 2006 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Are you ever gonna update?! You're killing us with the suspense! Kitsune Hanyou
| Reviewed By: Lori On: June 15, 2006 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just reread the last chapter. I absolutely can't wait for another! Your writing is incredible. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: tearzofred On: June 09, 2006 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE hurry up with the next chap! im a new reader and i love your story! i hope that you can continue! please hurry up with what your doing! please pretty pretty please finish!
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 17, 2006 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a HOT-T chapter! Someone, please, get me a fan, quick! (Waves hand back and forth to move air...and swoons.) Did you say lime? What a limon! Your writing amazes me. You write like you have been doing this for a very long time. You have much talent. Some parts that I so enjoyed: "last puppy in the shop look," I can see InuYasha doing this, most definitely; "'would not possess his bitch," gotta love his possessiveness; "InuYasha was struggling with his body and mind," very much in character; "It's...it's your fault," I really loved this,"didn't like the idea of his bitch leaving him for a second," shows how much he cares; there were many more. I blew a fuse LingMAO in regard to your comment about Naraku's tentacles and creepy hentai movies; soooo right. Sorry that I am late with my review. I thought that I was checking every night. (Little chaos in my life currently.) I humbly bow to the most artistic YM for sharing such a wonderful chapter. Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I caught up! (Somehow MM.org decided to not alert me that you had updated twice. Grr...) And wow...excellent! These past few chapter were really good, especially love getting insight to the character's thoughts. I don't think I've ever mentioned it, but you are really good at that. :) And just so you know, I have been known to go back and re-read earlier chapters of an ongoing story. So if by chance you edit it here, it may not be for nothing since I have a tendency to go back through stories. :P Heh...I may be weird for doing this, but if its a good story then I love reading parts more than once. Anyways, awesome job! Take care and hope to get another chapter from you as soon as you can. :) I'll just have to check periodically since MM.org is being mean. ;)
| Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh...I am so mad! I have this story bookmarked for easy access and I was wondering why I you hadn't updated in a long time. So I go to this story to see and it says you have updated! I'm so mad at MM.org now! Grr...well, I will happily go read the chapter now! :) And by the way, this is Knock-on-Wood, I just changed my penname online so this is what I go by now. Now...off to read! :D
| Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 06:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just so freaking killer your writting is so moving and discriptive and romantic I'm just flushed with pleasure. I love the pacing and flow there is never a dull moment and I am truly lost in your universe. Your use of small discriptions and vocabulary really fill out every character, I can see this story clearly in my mind. You are an amazinly beautiful wordsmith and every chapter of this story is pure gold. I love everything you are doing and am desperaly awaiting the next installment. You stir the romantic heart of this hardened hentai:)
| Reviewed By: SecretFAN On: April 01, 2006 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love what i have read so far!!! Seriously I think this fic is awsome please continue!!! MY One and only issue was that sometimes the chapters got really long but i still wanted to read everyword!!!! GOOD JoB!
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Angel harlock (no space) On: March 31, 2006 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a budding author myself. The last couple of weeks I have started to post my stuff online. I got a little writter's block so I went reading and found your story. You gave me back my insiration!! I love this story, I am a fool for not reading it before. Please update soon! And please go more into the kagura/sesshomaru info. its so intreguing.
| Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 15:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! it didn't notify me! They truly do hate me *tear*but you made my day by updating! so YAY you! keep updating your story is AMAZING! ^-^
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! It's three in the morning and I just can't stop reading your fic!! Awesome job! Your description is fantastic and Inuyasha just jumps right off the page. I've never read a fic where someone has caputured his essence as much as you do. It's like you delve into the mind of each character and allow us a brief look into each of their unique souls. Each chapter just keeps getting better and better and I can't wait until you update! I write fanfiction as well. Nothing as outstanding as your fic, but I'd love it if you took a look and told me what you thought.
| Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: March 26, 2006 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was HOT!!! I mean WOW!!! you are so talented. i cant wait till you update again. I am so looking forward to more so please make it soon. love your work BYE:-)
| Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 21:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey the fic! nice job!
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