| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: cheryl On: February 19, 2006 21:27 EST
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Would you believe, I'd been saving the update notice in my email 'til today? Goofing off and reading your story was my REWARD for getting an A on my midterms!!! (I've been that busy.) Anyhoo, this story is a bunch of fun, and I can hardly wait for the next update. What an entertaining plot! I'd also like to point out that as you've gained more writing experience, the coherence of your storytelling improved, and you seemed to find more of a balance in writing the internal monologues vs. moving the action along. (Which are both well done and needed.) Thanks for sharing- you made my day.
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 06, 2006 16:29 EST
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Another great chapter, though I did have to go back and read a chapter or two to remember where I was in the story. Excellent characterization on Inuyasha. Even in his demon form he is still concerned and protective of Kagome - perhaps a little too much. I hate that he had to go and hurt Kouga and Miroku, but perhaps that will make him come clean and strengthen his human side. I have always loved the conversations between the two inner Inuyasha's, but this chapter was especially good in that reguard. Thanks so much for writing for us. I look forward to reading more of this story! Thanks! Caitriona
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Title: HELLO!!!!!
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fics i've ever read! i hope the lemon comes soon! i just started writing my own fics and i hope you can help give me some support? feel free to email me at littlewhitfox01@yahoo.com ! love the fic! long live Inu/Kag, death to Kikyo!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. can't wait for the next chapter. I think mm.org hates everyone, tho. I tried to upload a fic but mm wouldn't keep it all on the page. weird.......
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Title: Stop Flattering Me
Reviewed By: Trusurprise On: January 19, 2006 17:33 EST
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Girl, this chapter was all you, and it turned out great! And for the record, I didn't like writing Inuyasha kicking Kouga's ass, even though he deserved it. Keep up the good work, girl. Each chapter shows your improvement and skill in character development and plot parallels. You continue to amaze me!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...YEAH FINALY AWSOME JOB WOOT UP-DATW ASAP I WANT MORE WOOT WOOT!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, another beautifully written chapter! the excitement during inu and kouga's encounter was at an all time high for me. i really thought there for a minute that he might kil him. i didn't expect kagome to do what she did, either. wow. what a way for her power to show itself again. amazing job. i thought there for a moment that he would kill miro as well. he is just going through pure torture here isn't he. poor inu. i feel so bad for him. now kagome has a bit of an idea of how inu feels. they should know (but i see why they're afraid) that they would never really hurt the other. such anguish and drama. tho, i so love the comic relief miro provides. lol. still one of my fave fics! keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Hanyou On: January 18, 2006 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved this fic from the begining. You are a very talented writer. Please update when you get a chance. I cant wait to see what happens between Inuyasha and Koga.
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Title: Yummy....
Reviewed By: addictedtopajamas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 01:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! How are you doing it? This is one of the best Inu fanfics I've read in a long while. Thank you for writting it. I do have one small teensy weensy request though? Could you please???? Update SOON!!!!!!! Please?
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Title: i love this story
Reviewed By: i love kagome On: January 06, 2006 17:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this the story..plz..make more
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! :) This most recent few chapters are awesome! I especially loved Ch.22 and the whole Inuyasha/Kagome moment...although, the whole Koga and Inuyasha confrontation...I'm really looking forward to it! Man, Koga is just throwing all common sense to the wind, isn't he? :P Well, as always your wording and description is perfect and lovely! I still can't believe that English is in fact your second language because your words in it flow beautifully! :) Anyway, sorry for rambling...great job with everything so far! Can't wait for the next chapter so please update again when you get the chance and have a happy New Year's! ^_^
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: December 27, 2005 21:14 EST
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This was such a great chapter, I loved it. What a cliffie to leave us with! Happy New Year and please post soo
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eep. war!? kouga is hott, but waay too dense. and uh oh. now inu is turning full youkai. what do you have planned for us ym? i hope things don't turn too ugly for our fav wolf bishie. this is still one of my favorite fics and i will hang in there for the long haul. that lime was...oh man. *crosses legs* good!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: ADemonsLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah! Kouga's so stupid. I hope Inuyasha doesnt hurt him to bad though. I love your story! Review as fast as you can!
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Title: gnomesareevil
Reviewed By: iluvsesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 11:45 EST
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WHY??!! Why must you do this to me?! Grrrrrrr....Ahem. I'm okay now.....Sooooo, I love it, it's really, really good. And update soon! *Party ppl everywhere, throw your hands in the air.*
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