| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love i,t i love it, i love it!! you rox at writin' soooooo UPDATE asap!! ^-^
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah that was an awsome chapter woot! NIce lime, tee hee hee, Oh Shit Kouga's in for it now RUN HOT WOLF BOY RUN!
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Title: hot in herre!!!
Reviewed By: Boop On: December 24, 2005 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was an intense chpt. i honestly don't know were to start. i'm glad inu and kags finally got so much of their chests and i absolutly, positively love it when they get all mushy and lovey like that;just not in a corny way (thank you inuyasha, the "mushy crap" line was fantastic). that lime was without a doubt one of the most delicious limes i've ever read, just tasty. also, what the hell is koga thinking? poor guy just can't take a hint. that will most definately be the battle of the year. one more thing. i noticed the lack of kikyo in this chpt. wonder if the bitch will succeed in seducing inu with that stolen body of hers(poor kagura) well that's all i have to say. -love ya, Boop
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 24, 2005 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Is it my imagination, or are there a lot of changes/clarifications made here? I decided to read the chapter again and I really, really, really enjoyed it even more than the first time around. Your so g-o-o-d at this writing business. I have no improvements to suggest. I do not think you can improve it further. A lot of hard work for you; wonderful reading for me; priceless. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 14:47 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm reviewing! I've been in a reviewing mood lately...anyway. I loved this chapter and the lemony scene was extremely hott!! -bows down to you- You are a great author! I love this story!!! Not sure if I've told you that but I'm telling you now!^^ Keep it up! This is one of the best stories I've ever read! You are a genius! I love how you portray each character and how you explain what they are going through. You don't focus on just one character. Each character plays an important role. Not very many authors do that. Well, can't wait for the next chapter! MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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Title: hot in herre!!!
Reviewed By: Boop On: December 24, 2005 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was an intense chpt. i honestly don't know were to start. i'm glad inu and kags finally got so much of their chests and i absolutly, positively love it when they get all mushy and lovey like that;just not in a corny way (thank you inuyasha, the "mushy crap" line was fantastic). that lime was without a doubt one of the most delicious limes i've ever read, just tasty. also, what the hell is koga thinking? poor guy just can't take a hint. that will most definately be the battle of the year. one more thing. i noticed the lack of kikyo in this chpt. wonder if the bitch will succeed in seducing inu with that stolen body of hers(poor kagura) well that's all i have to say. -love ya, Boop
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Title: still luv it much
Reviewed By: Boop On: December 20, 2005 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story almost since it started but just never reviewed and i just wanted to say that your story rocks. the 1st chpt. dream was really hot and everything went well before kiki-ho showed up. Poor Inu. also, Naraku is a real bastard for doing that to Kags and Inuyasha can be a jerk when he's mad (which all of us inuyasha fans know, but we still love him) One more thing. I'm usually a See/Rin fan but I must admit Sesshomaru and kagura makes a great lord and lady couple. Keep writing, give me a new chpt,do something damn you!!! Don't leave me in the dark!!! -love ya, Boop
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Reviewed By: Tia-chan On: December 17, 2005 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the whole stroy so far...wwell except that kikyou stream part..eww!lol. I really like the kagura and sesshoumaru parts so if you could add more itd be much apprieciated! Thanks so much! Tia
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: ADemonsLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutly amazing! The way you write with such ease and amazing flow is vary rare and shows what huge talent you have. I love the way you took your time with Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, instead of rushing it and making it messy. Your are an awsome writer, i am blown away! Please dont stop writing and UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe?
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 09:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa, yeah I'm so glad you finaly up-dated, woot! Keep up the good work, I want to know what happens next ^_^...umm btw If Shippou is Youkai he should have been able to Smell Naraku on Kagome, even if he is young because she was so close to him...just letting you know incase you wanted to use that for the next chapter ^_^ MANTEN!
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Title: -ch 21
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 20:50 EST
Comment/Review:
i skipped/skimmed chunks around the beginning and those chapters not centering on the inuyashatachi. anyway, an ok chapter. Still, i will continue 2 follow your story, ja!
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Reviewed By: britbrat On: December 16, 2005 17:32 EST
Comment/Review:
awesome! hurry with the new one! i wanna read it. good luck with exams!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: December 16, 2005 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i feel so bad for inu and kag. : ( damn that naraku and his evil schemes. inu is gonna give himself a great big headache if he doesn't slow down his thought process. lol. i am excited about where this next chap will take us. take your time, i will stick around. i luv this fic!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 12:52 EST
Comment/Review:
YAY! another chapter!Can't wait until the next one is up!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_girl142008 On: December 11, 2005 22:43 EST
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OMGosh! I hope you are not done writing! I think I'm gonna die! You HAVE to e-mail me when you get the next Chap up k? Shippou_kit2008@yahoo.com Keep up the good work!
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