| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: ADemonsLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutly amazing! The way you write with such ease and amazing flow is vary rare and shows what huge talent you have. I love the way you took your time with Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, instead of rushing it and making it messy. Your are an awsome writer, i am blown away! Please dont stop writing and UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe?
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 09:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa, yeah I'm so glad you finaly up-dated, woot! Keep up the good work, I want to know what happens next ^_^...umm btw If Shippou is Youkai he should have been able to Smell Naraku on Kagome, even if he is young because she was so close to him...just letting you know incase you wanted to use that for the next chapter ^_^ MANTEN!
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Title: -ch 21
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 20:50 EST
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i skipped/skimmed chunks around the beginning and those chapters not centering on the inuyashatachi. anyway, an ok chapter. Still, i will continue 2 follow your story, ja!
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Reviewed By: britbrat On: December 16, 2005 17:32 EST
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awesome! hurry with the new one! i wanna read it. good luck with exams!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: December 16, 2005 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i feel so bad for inu and kag. : ( damn that naraku and his evil schemes. inu is gonna give himself a great big headache if he doesn't slow down his thought process. lol. i am excited about where this next chap will take us. take your time, i will stick around. i luv this fic!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 12:52 EST
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YAY! another chapter!Can't wait until the next one is up!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_girl142008 On: December 11, 2005 22:43 EST
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OMGosh! I hope you are not done writing! I think I'm gonna die! You HAVE to e-mail me when you get the next Chap up k? Shippou_kit2008@yahoo.com Keep up the good work!
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: artemis the hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 06:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the plot is wonderful! totally love it! I like the way Inuyasha is always so idiotic...in a way. so cute! anyway i hope u update more!
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Reviewed By: Sorcha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter, your ideas are original in a fanfiction world dowsed in the same stories. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! definitely one of your best chaps so far. not really confusing i'd say (the beginning), just written from a different point of view. explaining the situation after it's already happened through kagura. nice. i love the way you use kagura's powers. especially where sessh is concerned. oh hoho, you are a genius. using her heart and souls to give the "witch" life. absolute genius. now i am more into this fic than before. after every new update i get more excited. i also get more depressed that there isn't more to read. : ( holy hell, you make me hate naraku in ways i can't begin to describe! i swear, inu has got to get it together and have faith in that kagome will forgive him for his episode with kikyou. or would she not? ; ) i will SO be looking forward to your next chaps. i hope you get lots of Good reviews and your muses continue working their magic! take your time with the updates, they're worth the wait!!
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Title: Head Inflator!
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 11:47 EDT
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Awesome job, girl! I haven't left a review in forever since I beta, but I want everyone to know what an awesome chapter this is! YM's skill at writing Sesshomaru and Kagura are top-notch, the chemistry between them is uncomparable and this chapter shows all that and more. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does once he finds Kagura. :)
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa, I LOVE YOUR STORY IT'S FREAKEN AWSOME ONIGAI ONIGAI OOOONNNIIGGGAAAIIIIIII, post the next chapter asap! ONIGAIIII! Lady Kagome may Kami bless you and your awsome story...
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Title: KONNICHIWA!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ara Kami, your story is so so sooooo wonderfull, I love it, I have allreddy read the first 8 chapters but I saddly have to get off the computer now, *Crys* BUt I'll be finishing it later I must read more, *reviwers eye sudenly flash red then return to normal* Gomen I really need to read the rest of your sory, Onigia keep up the good work your a very talented writer I don't know how you could think otherwise, JA NE! Lady Kagome may Kami bless you...
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: neko youkai On: September 27, 2005 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness! this is an amazing fic! i didn't even need the ramen and pocky bribe to review. i love the way you get inside each character's head (especially inuyasha and kagome) and their own inner struggles on what's happening. for a minute there, though, i was confused as to whether inuyasha was berating himself aloud or inwardly after kagome kissed naraku. and now he has to wait to say those three words so it doesn't sound like he's just making up for leaving her alone for naraku to stumble upon.... ***applause to you*** i know i shouldn't pressure you to update, but i get antsy. this is an excellent story and i can't wait to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...you don't have to thank me! ^_^ Anyway, this chapter was awsome, very well done indeed! And I loved everything, although I found it quite entertaining with the whole Kagura/Kikyo bonding time! :P I find that your characterization and plot handling are perfect, they keep getting better and better...but, man, I still can't believe that your first language isn't English, its SPANSISH! You write so beautifully in the english language! :D Anyway, enough blabbling on my part, I think I have praised you enough...although maybe not? Well, great work, excellent job, fabulous plot and happenings! (I love the recent turn of events!) Please, just update again soon when you can! Until then, take care and don't let real life bring you don't much, okay? ;) Adios!
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