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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: artemis the hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 06:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the plot is wonderful! totally love it! I like the way Inuyasha is always so idiotic...in a way. so cute! anyway i hope u update more!
| Reviewed By: Sorcha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter, your ideas are original in a fanfiction world dowsed in the same stories. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! definitely one of your best chaps so far. not really confusing i'd say (the beginning), just written from a different point of view. explaining the situation after it's already happened through kagura. nice. i love the way you use kagura's powers. especially where sessh is concerned. oh hoho, you are a genius. using her heart and souls to give the "witch" life. absolute genius. now i am more into this fic than before. after every new update i get more excited. i also get more depressed that there isn't more to read. : ( holy hell, you make me hate naraku in ways i can't begin to describe! i swear, inu has got to get it together and have faith in that kagome will forgive him for his episode with kikyou. or would she not? ; ) i will SO be looking forward to your next chaps. i hope you get lots of Good reviews and your muses continue working their magic! take your time with the updates, they're worth the wait!!
| Title: Head Inflator!
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 11:47 EDT
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Awesome job, girl! I haven't left a review in forever since I beta, but I want everyone to know what an awesome chapter this is! YM's skill at writing Sesshomaru and Kagura are top-notch, the chemistry between them is uncomparable and this chapter shows all that and more. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does once he finds Kagura. :)
| Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa, I LOVE YOUR STORY IT'S FREAKEN AWSOME ONIGAI ONIGAI OOOONNNIIGGGAAAIIIIIII, post the next chapter asap! ONIGAIIII! Lady Kagome may Kami bless you and your awsome story...
| Title: KONNICHIWA!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ara Kami, your story is so so sooooo wonderfull, I love it, I have allreddy read the first 8 chapters but I saddly have to get off the computer now, *Crys* BUt I'll be finishing it later I must read more, *reviwers eye sudenly flash red then return to normal* Gomen I really need to read the rest of your sory, Onigia keep up the good work your a very talented writer I don't know how you could think otherwise, JA NE! Lady Kagome may Kami bless you...
| Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: neko youkai On: September 27, 2005 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness! this is an amazing fic! i didn't even need the ramen and pocky bribe to review. i love the way you get inside each character's head (especially inuyasha and kagome) and their own inner struggles on what's happening. for a minute there, though, i was confused as to whether inuyasha was berating himself aloud or inwardly after kagome kissed naraku. and now he has to wait to say those three words so it doesn't sound like he's just making up for leaving her alone for naraku to stumble upon.... ***applause to you*** i know i shouldn't pressure you to update, but i get antsy. this is an excellent story and i can't wait to see where it goes.
| Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...you don't have to thank me! ^_^ Anyway, this chapter was awsome, very well done indeed! And I loved everything, although I found it quite entertaining with the whole Kagura/Kikyo bonding time! :P I find that your characterization and plot handling are perfect, they keep getting better and better...but, man, I still can't believe that your first language isn't English, its SPANSISH! You write so beautifully in the english language! :D Anyway, enough blabbling on my part, I think I have praised you enough...although maybe not? Well, great work, excellent job, fabulous plot and happenings! (I love the recent turn of events!) Please, just update again soon when you can! Until then, take care and don't let real life bring you don't much, okay? ;) Adios!
| Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: neko youkai On: September 22, 2005 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness! this is an amazing fic! i didn't even need the ramen and pocky bribe to review. i love the way you get inside each character's head (especially inuyasha and kagome) and their own inner struggles on what's happening. for a minute there, though, i was confused as to whether inuyasha was berating himself aloud or inwardly after kagome kissed naraku. and now he has to wait to say those three words so it doesn't sound like he's just making up for leaving her alone for naraku to stumble upon.... ***applause to you*** i know i shouldn't pressure you to update, but i get antsy. this is an excellent story and i can't wait to see where it goes.
| Reviewed By: allie-chan26 On: September 21, 2005 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics that ive read in a long time. I really love all the angst and the plot is really good. And I loved Kaguras conversation with kikyo. Ive been wanting someone to say that for the longest time...lol :)
| Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 20:14 EDT
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...wow....wow....WOW!! omg wow. this story is bloody fantastic!! i love your writing style, i love your plot, i love your love scenes...i just...wow!!! xD please please please please continue and finish this story soon! please please please!!
| Reviewed By: leila-chan (nsi) sorry On: September 20, 2005 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, that part where kag told inu that she knew it wasn't really him that was kissing her would have been the perfect opportunity for him to tell her about the kikyou incident. they both had similar emotions going through them at the time it happened and they should be able to understand and forgive one another. inu is just too damned analytical for his own good!...did i just say inu and analytical in the same sentence? O_o the whole internal rant that inu had in the middle of the chap was priceless. hah. of course he would loathe thinking. poor guy. so torn. please post more when you can. also, good luck with the unemployment thing. i truly hope things turn out well for you. : )
| Reviewed By: JenniferBuchanan On: September 19, 2005 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I aboslutely love ur creative writing style and how you always keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. You have briliant ideas and you always make the plot so life like. I just wanted to say that ur an amazing writer and you inspire me... no wonder ur writing won awards! it's because people like me really love you writing style and creativity... even though i don't write as well as you and don't even have an account w/ mediaminer, i truely enjoy your writing. All I have to say is keep up the good work and please PLEASE make more chapters! I can't wait to read the next one! Hopefully it will come out soon... maybe with a lemon sometime soon cause all this teasing is getting me a little "Hot" lets just say ;) Hope to see a new chapter up soon! ciao
| Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 19:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, gosh...I can't believe the nerve of some people. I just read Katsudoo review and I have to say that that person needs to get a serious reality check because obviously he/she hasn't read many fanfics. You work is wonderful, it beautiful even. So, please disregard that person. The whole 'Bitch' term thing has been done by many authors so he might as well be insulting a good majority of fanfic authors out there who write for Inuyasha. Its creative and very imaginitive! :D And as for the Japanese language mixed in, I think that its wonderful that a lot of people choose to mix in some Japanese terms into their fanfiction writing! I mean, it gives the piece of work a more Japanese culture feel, since originally the idea of Inuyasha is Rumiko Takahashis...and wait, she's Japanese! It allows us to not forget the roots of the story, you know? So, please don't listen to Katsudoo. Your story is awsome. Its beautiful! And don't let anyone discourage you from writing exactly how you are, just keep at it! Anyway, just wanted to say that...I'm hoping you don't feel too bad about that review that you got. Even if the person didn't intend to insult you, it sounded like a real blow. Just ignore them. Well, until next time, I wish you well in your real life! :D
| Reviewed By: Katsudoo On: September 09, 2005 03:33 EDT
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This story was really really good except for a few things. The first and most minor is Japanese language mixed in. Things like hanyou which don't have quite the same punch in English aren't as bad as baka and kami. Baka adds no meaning other then the 'look, I'm using Japanese' element and kami is never used by the Japanese in an exclamtion like 'Oh god!' and is only used when in prayer or in reference to a particular god while talking to someone from what I can see. Shimatta seems to be the more accurate translation. Second, and most annoying, is the constant use of the word bitch. Bitch is the term for female dog or as an insult. Seeing as InuYasha is a dog demon, not a dog, it's not likely he would ever refer to (nor did he ever refer to either of them during the show) as 'bitch'. Kagome would be more likely to take that as the insult it is when applied to humans and smack him around for it. It's a glaring inconsistency with the character that just.........really just made the story really impossible to fully enjoy. When you start to get into the mood, when they're both being sweet or naughty with each other and then the word bitch gets thrown in...it just seems to throw the mood out the window which is a really big shame because I liked this a lot except for those points.
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