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Title: AnonymousAutumn
Reviewed By: AnonymousAutumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2014 05:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are going to continue Okay I sounded like a late someone
ordering you around but seriously, this fic...wow. It had me in my
blanket (Yeah that's serious. Don't laugh.) Continue please? I know
it's not over, I mean his teammates and all.. -A
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Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...My..Goddess..it was so -she covered her mouth as her eyes were wide- ...and so..my mouth was open the whole time..and now..i am crying...this..this story is so good..are you done with it?..or are you going to add....I don't think I can stand..not knowing if Kai is alright
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Reviewed By: chibi Setsuna-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 09:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
It so sad. My Kai being raped and tortured. Good job in describing Kai's feelings. It felt so real. It was as if I was in his place. Keep the good work and update soon. Yours truly, chibi Setsuna-chan
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: Anaru On: June 24, 2005 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah me again..... I messed up on the ffirst reviewv just to let you know that was for Broken! Gomen!
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Title: Minime
Reviewed By: Anaru On: June 24, 2005 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling and grammer were great! At least I think so since I was to interested in the story. Originality/Creativity loved it! Enjoyment! Hell yeah! And the rating yeah it deserves to be were it is! Okay update soon! Why? Bwcause this story rocks!
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Reviewed By: crystal_clear_13 On: May 23, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i have to admit this is pretty good. I've never seen a story start out like that. Very, very, ver, VERY, creative! Good job! Update soon!
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Title: Zanite&Zanx
Reviewed By: LysergRaine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 00:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter I can't wait to read the next chapter well see ya later bye and good luck your other stories also well see ya later bye :}
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Title: Update soon!!!
Reviewed By: yamimylove (to lazy to log in) On: May 06, 2005 17:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
i loved your fanfic, the motions are so real... well please i update soon!!
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Reviewed By: CharmedBookworm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good, you really have to update somemore so I don't go crazy.
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Title: roxxy
Reviewed By: roxxy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 15:23 EST
Comment/Review:
how could you do that to poor kai! and didnt you say that voltaire was dead? im confused!
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Title: crying fr Kai poor Kai being tortured
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 22:55 EST
Comment/Review:
Please continue even if I hate to read kai being tortured. I really hope he finds a true love in this story.
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: March 04, 2005 22:41 EST
Comment/Review:
I love reading these things! You've got to try "Resurfacing" on fanfiction.net. I'm not sure if that's how you spell it but the author also wrote a sequal called "Crimson's child". I totally loved your fic and I was majorly disappointed when it ended. Only two chapters! Woe is me! Please update soon! I loved how you expressed Kai's emotions it was so real I almost thought I was the one crying. "Resurfacing" can do that to me to and I just love crying over these things and then getting that wonderful rush of joy (cheesy I know but it's true) when something good happens. Once again thankies very much for writing this and please update soon I'm getting all giddy and twitchish. Thank You. DK;) P.S. READ THAT FICTION TRUST ME EVEN THOUGH IT'S LONG IT IS SO WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: .YEHUDIS On: February 13, 2005 23:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it but who is Blkov or whatever his name is? i sorta stopped watching beyblade for a while and you have to update soon please
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: LysergRaine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that was a great chapter I can't wait for you to finish the next chapter I can't wait to read it well see ya soon ^ ^ V
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Reviewed By: LysergRaine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that was a great chapter I can't wait for you to finish the next chapter I can't wait to read it well see ya soon ^ ^ V
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