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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Commitments Made In Blood
Reviewed By: Kaguyas Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 15:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I love this story to death!!! I think its so awesome how you update it so quickly!! The plot is great and the action is constantly there!! I also loved the last chapter and I didn't think it was just a character bashing type of chapter!! I can't wait for your next update!! So do it quickly! XD
| Title: Commitments Made In Blood
Reviewed By: Kaguyas Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 15:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I love this story to death!!! I think its so awesome how you update it so quickly!! The plot is great and the action is constantly there!! I also loved the last chapter and I didn't think it was just a character bashing type of chapter!! I can't wait for your next update!! So do it quickly! XD
| Reviewed By: DeJaVu On: March 02, 2005 14:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i love all you stories and this one is just getting better and better ;p Kagome is so frustrated (please don't mind my spelling) with Youko and their relationship that is quet unique...hehe I can only wonder when Naraku is going to make his move! Oooo that will be sooo interesting. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 14:25 PST
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yeah! I loved it! Can we have fun yet with all the cute boys and girls?
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Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: March 02, 2005 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, kagome really shouldn't be that mad, Youko was only trying to protect what is his, which is Kagome since she is his mate. No I am not saying the way you portrayed her or anything is bad ^^ I'm just talking like I would do a normal fic, just like I could say wow Kagome is a bitch and I really hope you wouldn't get mad at me for saying so ^^; anyways lol i figured the votes would go that way. I can't believe someone flamed you over something like that. -.- me and kurama shall sit and wait for the next chapter now. see how everything turns out and what koenma has to say to hiei and kurama.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man! You sound like you got blasted by some idiotic reviewers... sorry about that. I rather like how you wrapped the situation up. Hojo is... clueless and somewhat annoying; he's always appeared to me to be willfully self-deceptive when it comes to Kagome's affections in the manga. I think you handled it very well. I like Kuronue more and more as I read this. I frankly know the least about him out of all the personages to appear in YYH; your portrayal is delightful. Plus, he's getting one hell of a laugh out of the situation. And how you had her mother react in this chapter was PERFECT. Yeah, she's been over-protective in earlier chapters, but that's her perogative as a mother. She's a clearly intelligent, contemplative person from how I perceiver her drawn in the manga; to have her logically explaining things to Kagome is on target in my book. Once she gets accustomed to something- like a dog-eared person hanging around her house, or enchanted masks, not to mention living with that father of hers! - she doesn't act hastily. I really liked this chapter; I do hope you can find the time to update soon. However, I realize you've updated an incredible amount in the past week(s) and so no one could complain if you have to take a break.
| Reviewed By: Person... On: March 02, 2005 13:23 PST
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Hey! Awesome story so far! KILL HOJO! He's just so nice it's creepy. Hehe, Kuronue and Hiei helping Kagome. I thought it was sweet. I would have put my money on Kagome for who was going to kill Hojo first, she has a temper alright. I hope you're not sick or anything, you usually update so fast, although that is probably hard. I just hope you don't have a case of the dreaded writers block! *gasp* man that would suck... oh well. Update soon, k? Later! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 12:54 PST
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Ha!Ha! That's what you get Hojo! KILL! HIM! KILL! HIM! My other friend Ashlee wants him to die too! He is way to nice to be natural. Plus he is just so creepy.*shudder* Oh I like it a lot so, I hope to see more chapters again soon.
| Reviewed By: LadyoftheWest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 11:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just read this in its entirety over the last day. I am totally in love with your other fic, Circle of Souls and have considered it my favorite up till now. I think I will have to consider this one at least a tie for first place. I would also like to say that the tone you use with this one is very different from Circle of Souls and the fact that you can take a cast of characters and write two seperate stories with completely different flavors is wonderful. You should pat yourself on the back. Keep up the good work and I can't wait till I get an email saying it has been updated!
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 07:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i hope ur not sick, two days with no updates? lol, i'm going thourh withdrawal. i'm used to gettng up and seeing a update in the morning from u and then b4 i go to bed another one. but now, 2 days without one? i hope ur not sick and if u r i hope u feel better real soon!!! i love this story so much along with all ur others. to think i first got hooked on u by circle of souls, lol. now i love all ur stories. u just write so well! tessie
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:07 PST
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I'm starting to get worried... Are you okay? Your updates are usually there daily... though it has been one day and I've been telling myslef that you are not beholden to update at the fast rate you've been going at, I can't help but worry. ^.^;
| Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 09:09 PST
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MmmmmHaaaa....I love it. You have to have another Hojo/Kurama confrentation! That was just too good. Hehe. I love the way the story is progressing especially Youko and Kagome's um headbutting and Kuroune's playfulness and amussment at Youko's troubles. Sorry I didn't review lately. I was off at a wedding and had to catch up on reading chapters after getting back. I can't wait till the next chapter Yey! Hmmm... Hojo to die or not to die...I don't know I think it would be more fitting to cause him to have to live the rest of his life disfigured and scared. Let him fear for his life because of Youko. I'm getting anssy to see the confrontation between Yusuke and Youko. I would love to know the torture that Kurama has in mind for him, that involves Kayko. Hope that is coming up soon. Will Lord pain in the ass Sessy be showing up anymore in the story or is his part finished?? I think it would be funny to watch him get his ass kicked around by the boys. Anyway looking ofrward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Sesshy81(notloggedin) On: March 01, 2005 08:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nah, don't kill him. What Youko already did is enough. Hojo may be dense, but I doubt even he would be willing to go near Kurama gain after such a thing, regardless of how much of the memorywas wiped. If nothing else, he know nows that Suuichi is a jealous, possessive badass, who will not tolerate intrusions. Even if knowledge of Youko is wiped away, that will stay.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:34 PST
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Mou, I am really beginning to loathe the word limit... I say dress it up as Hojo and give Kuronue one free pass for killing a human! Not Youko though, because he doesn't want Kagome mad it him. Okay, maybe her wrath is worth it... Er, as I was saying before I was cut off, First Inuyasha, then Youko, Kuronue, and Hiei. Who's next? Shippou? Or Yusuke? Maybe Reikai... that would be amusing... and if Youko manages to get him into a position that it looks as if he is guilty of violating one of Reikai's laws to the point he needs to 'disappear' perhaps Youko wouldn't have to worry about him anymore... *evil grin* Er, I have no idea why I'm plotting murder in my review. Great confrontation though, I can't wait to see what happens to Kouga. THough Kouga will probably get the hint after a few sniffs, and not bother her too much(except for the "Why? Did he force you?" comments) so he won't be that big of an issue. At least I think... for all I know you could be planning on making him persistent and such, though I doubt it. I really am enjoying how you are characterizing Kagome, it just seems, Kagome. It was a great chapter(though no disembowelment) and makes me want to know more, and makes me wonder if Koenma was watching or something... 'till next time!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:26 PST
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Jumping up and down for joy, then realizing you have a pervert in your head. Yes, yes, I agree that too many details are better than none! I personally, am enamored with your writing. Heh, I was forced to leave this newest chapter, right as Youko appeared to go to school. Alas, all day I was voting for disembowelment... much to the confusion of those around me. Heh I'm just sad over the fact I won't be able to continue constant reviews, but I will try! I love reviewing this. I have to wrestle the printed version from my friend's, or print another copy, and then I have to go throught he process of updating it. Dream Youko... that would be kinky... Have you read 'Mind Links' by buffybot? It deals with a 'dream' Youko once or twice. About the tornado, I'm just glad I was no where near it. No, no you didn't disappoint, though I was thinking of disembowelment all day. Heh, you actually managed to give him some punishment without killing him. For that, I respect you. After all, we can't kill off all the dense characters in one swing... this chapter, was awesome. Though there was no disembowelment... O.o I think I've developed a sub-conscious urge courtesy of the spirit fox in my head to see him disemboweled. Which is odd, as I have no spirit fox in my head. I can see Hojo reacting like that, and Kuronue and Hiei tearing him apart. He was lucky that Koenma has them on parole... we think. He's definately been added to Youko's hit list. He just pisses off the demons, doesn't he? First | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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