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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 16:40 PST
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Intriguing. I'm curious, very curious, to see how the whole hiei-kagome interaction will pan out; I mean talk about system shock? I had this weird mental image of Hiei seeing her and freaking out and sputtering out monty python lines... "[She's] not dead yet! [She's} gettin' better!" ...but I pulled an all-nighter last night, so that might be the reason why... and if Youko Kurama will believe either of them. Regardless, 'Twas lovely and a wonderful break from writing an essay I'm going to flunk anyway! ... C'est la vie, ne? ~Shabopo
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 16:07 PST
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Ah, I was wondering what happened to the other people... And I'm betting Kagome's mom is going to start getting worried soon. And Kagome is sustaining muktiple injuries to the ones Naraku had inflicted earlier to the ones Leiko made Inuyasha create. I guess I really like how you portray Youko in this fic... I just wanted to mention there's an awesome web-site 'bout Kitsunes I was using to determine Youko's/ Shippo's behavior. Did you know all kitsunes are capable of illusions? So Youko could cast an illusion on himself that he's Shuichi, and no one would know the difference. I have the feeling Shuichi is going to be stuck for a long time... the website is http://www.comnet.ca/~foxtrot/kitsune/kitsune1.htm It's a great website about our favorite type of mythological fox! Check it out, it's interesting if nothing else. I meant to mention that yesterday, but I forgot... How will Youko make it through the well? Can he make it because(I presume) he has some of Kagome's blood? Or will he be barred? Update soon!
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 17, 2005 15:18 PST
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^_^ yay, another update along with the last chapter. I was asleep >.> you woke me up ;_; anyways,^^ hehe, I can't wait to read the confrontation part and whatever happens next. I'm getting more into this story already o.o, that's a good thing right? *hands you candy* ^^ hope you update soon, have some candy of your choice ^_^
| Reviewed By: Person... On: February 17, 2005 14:49 PST
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I absolutly LOVE this story! I can't wait to see how Youko (or Suiichi) and Kagome interact with each other... 'cause... well,all the other times they talked she was in shock, or delerious form blood loss. Neither of the two make for great conversations... well, abywho, please update soon... and your toehr stories too please! I love them as well, and can't wait to see what happends next in those as well!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl (not logged in) On: February 17, 2005 14:45 PST
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Oh well, at least I tried to give you an idea... maybe I should make a crossover of YYH/IY but I'm not sure yet. Still deciding on what to do for a story of my own. Oh yes, can't forgot the lovable bat demon Kuronue!... and Sesshomaru, and Touya, and Kouga(even though he's in love with Kag), and Teenage Koenma.... gods, why do men on anime have to be so awsomely handsome and strong? God is torturing me, I swear... and yet I love it. I know, I'm weird but who can blame me? I love anime. Anyway, if Leiko's sister is around, tell her that she'll have her moneys worth working for me. I can pay her big time with my allowance money I saved up, hehe, this is going to be good... update please! *~*crazy-punk-gurl
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, here comes Naraku(sigh). He never takes a break does his? I hope Hiei and Kurama tears him apart limb from limb!
| Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 12:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so amny things happening. I hope Hiei and Kurama get to talk to each other soon because it just wouldn't be kewl to kill off everyone's favorite jaganashii (i think that's how its spelled). Poor Kagome. So many things are happening to her at once! If it were me I'd feel like this... @_@. I am wondering what is going to be done about Sango, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara. I know that this is question may give away more of your story, but is there any way of bringing back those listed above (and I'm only writing that because I'm too lazy to write their names out again or to copy and paste). I am also wondering how Reikai knows about Kagome. Then I wonder how Kagome is going to react to Shuichi-Kurama when Youko has to go back inside. Yeah, I have lots of questions that I like to ask... sorry if they are the ones that give too much away. But I hope to read lots more soon! Great Job!^_^
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 12:49 PST
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Thanks, I would love help from Leiko's sister, hehe, two heads are better then one I guess. Hmm, I have a few idea's that Naraku can appear. Like this one: He can be in the future time but he was sealed in a deep sleep(like Inu-Yasha) but from somone, like Koenma or King Enma and then someone powerful that hates the YYH gang and unseals him and helps him out but in the end Naraku has the upper hand and kills him... Gods I love my imagenation, it's fun to use it but very dangerous! Hehe, anyway, nice chapter and go Yoko for healing Kagome! He's such a yummy character, same with Shuichi, and Hiei, and Jin, and Yusuke....*drool*... okay, okay, I'm done rambling again soooo.... UPDATE!!!!XD *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 08:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AWMIGAWWWWD. *squeeks happily* That was such an amazingly good, chapter, I bow down and worship you, oh mighty queen of all awesomeness. It was so sweet! and and and.. I dont even know what to say about it. I love it. (My, my. Don't I change my tune once you get to the parts I want? *jerks thumb back at the other, rather insulting, review.* ;D) Seriously, though, this was just.. augh. I still don't know how to describe it, other than I loved it.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 17, 2005 05:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a great author!! I love how you write!!! You make me love anyone! Like in 'You Will Be Mine' I don't like Yus/Kag pairing but I love yours^_^!! I love all of your stories!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Anonamus On: February 16, 2005 20:39 PST
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Hey, I love your fic, and I can't wait until you update the next chapter! I hope you really get around to it tonight! So, keep up the good work, and update your other fics to please! They're also awsomeness! ^-^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 18:10 PST
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*blinks* And you have just demonstrated another way for them to meet! Kill off all of Kagome's friend's with the help of a mind-manipulator, then have Hiei save her, then go to the future and meet up with Youko. Ah, I'm not really sad... I think the only time a character death would upset me is if it's in the original or just pointless. I'll call their deaths 'blood sacrifices for the plot'. I'm applauding you right now though, you didn't skip out on describing their deaths! Though that does lead me to an interesting question... what's it like to be pulled apart limb by limb? Er, no, I don't really want to know... Hm, I wonder what the traveler who goes through their next is going to think? Glad I made you hyper, now I have to go and finish stuff... that I was avoiding... Heh.
| Title: Yay
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 16, 2005 18:01 PST
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Yay you updated already and once again I can't wait to find out what happens. Sounds like a big confrontation, will Youko find out Hiei is knew her from the Feudal Era? guess I'll find out ^_^ wait til Kagome finds out it isn't Inuyasha (Youko is WAY better >.>) hope you update soon
| Reviewed By: Mandie On: February 16, 2005 17:30 PST
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This is a great story. I love your writings. The only other one I've read of yours though is the Circle of Souls. Others you have wrote, if any, are probably just as good. It's sad that all the Inu group had to die though, but that's understandable. You had to do what you had to do. Only thing is I hope you don't turn Youko and Kurama against Hiei. He's another one of my faves. Hopefully he will be able to tell them what happened before the event occurs. But if it doesn't happen that way I can understand, you have to do what you have to do, it's your story anyways. Who am I to complain? Anyways, I hope you update soon, which I'm not complaining about the time between updates because theres been updates everyday so far. Good luck with your work. I hope to read more soon! (-_-)>
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR KAGOME!! YAY NOW IT CAN BE YOUKO/KAGOME/KURAMA^_^!!!!!!!!
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