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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 16:43 PST
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MORE MORE MORE!!! I loved it, yep sad about Shippou but you did really well with that part of the story. Not vomit gore but can't stop reading and skip to the other parts good gore. By the way I think the fight sense was done very well. You lie your better at them the you say. I like how you fixed the how did she get to the well problem. Evil women Poor Hiei, he's gonna get his ass kicked around before he can tell the truth isn't he ;p From the few yyh eposiodes I've seen Kuwabara is umm... very brave and kind hearted but very dense, slow learner and the propetual comical relife for the group. I have complete faith in you being able to pass him off with out making him too OOC. You've done so well so far. HEHE Can't wait till the next chapter. HEY do you have any authors and or stories (cross overs preforably YYH IY crosses) That you can recomened. Looking for some new ones to follow well waiting for the others I read to update.
| Reviewed By: Nature's Child On: February 16, 2005 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I have read a few fan fics and I am sorry to say that most lack the quality that is flowing out of yours. You have a wonderful voice developed. I am sorry to hear about the Kurama/Kagome thing, since I happen to be quite fond on Inuyasha. Oh well. Can't have everything. Do continue.
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:10 PST
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Wow, nice chapter! It wasn't fair that they had to die...*sigh*... oh well! I get over deaths very quickly once they are done... hehe, that spell stuff must work like a charm. I wonder if Leiko can controll my idiotic brother of mine... hehe that would be totally sweet! To control ppl like that... hm that would be really cool. Anyway, I love how your mind works with Youko getting wild up about Hiei's scent on Kagome, even though it was the past Hiei, hehe. Really good. Hmm, I wonder if Naraku will try to pass through the well... so far only Inu-Yasha and Kagome can, I doubt Naraku can even pass it with out splatting on the floor of the well.... hahahahahaha!!!!!XD That would be an interesting sight! Okay, now I'm rambling on again.... UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!XD
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:48 PST
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NO... Hiei wouldn't do something like that! That's mean! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 14:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'll just assume Kagome didn't sit Inuyasha because her injuries muddled her mind. ;) Poor Shippou. ;.; I understand the need for the character deaths, but.. *sniffles sadly* on the complete opposite side of emotions here.. *demented giggle* Hiei gonna get his butt handed to him on a silver platter. =D OH! Guess what your bad plot bunnie did to me? I have the barest beginning of a YYH/IY crossover plot beginning to form. Once I've got a better idea of it, it would be good to bounce ideas around with you again, if you don't mind. :3
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Squeek! I already told you my morbid love for killing off my favourite characters, but that doesn't mean I have to look forward to it in someone else's story. XD I can't decide if I should be upset about their deaths, or eager for Kags to go home and meet Kurama. I'm so, so pushing my time limit here, I need to be at work in like.. 15 minutes and I'm not at all redy. See what your story does to me? XD *waggles finger* Bad, baaaad addictive stories. Bad! o_o.
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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And you said you disliked writing battle scenes. Silly goof. You write them just fine. You did use the word deflect two sentances in a row I think, but thats the only thing I noticed. *cheers* I love Hiei when he keeps things from Kurama with the sole intent on being irritating. Ehm. o_o The total lack of sleep has ruined any and all abilities to write good sentance structure, for me. Eeks. XD
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 08:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aiee! My father forgot to pay the phone bill, and our phone company is.. full of imbeciles. They said they fixed it, but really they didn't. *twitches* Must... finish other updates before going to work. XD Oh! I noticed: The girl's open and friendly nature would easily be here downfall if she wasn't careful. 'here'. I dont know if you want to fix that or not, but I thought I should point it out. I love how you did Hiei, by the way. =3
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the great story!!
| Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 00:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMM...By the way I found a picker of Kouronue (SP RIGHT??) and I have to say yes not at all guilty about drooling. Yes, They really need to stop making the umm...cold, evil, not nice demons so damned hot! They have gotta give a girl a brake once in a while. I love the story. I'm really loving the depth your giving to each character. Especially to Youko. I have to agree with you on the way he has to really feel about his situation. Thought I'm sad to say I love they way you've added depth to Inu Yasha allmost makes me not want to see thier love ended. I have to say GOOD your finally getting to that part in the story. Though I love the depth and set up, I'M DIEING HERE to see the meeting between Kurama and Kagome!! I don't wanna see Shippou suffer thought. That would be so sad Anyway can't wait till the next chapter.
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 23:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome ^_^ I love your story and I hope you get to update it soon. I was looking through and I saw and I am already hooked on it ^^; I plan on reading your other fics too. Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 23:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ya~y!!!XD Another wonderful story! I love how Youko is in here, not so perverted and cold-hearted killer that he is sometimes. Sometimes people make him really OOC and I hate that sometimes, there should be a law against that! Oh well, anyway, love it so far. One question... will Yusuke and Kuwabaka make an apperince(sp?) in here? Just asking 'cause I think it's funny the way you make them do things... hehe.:-) Hope you update this story and your others!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: February 15, 2005 21:23 PST
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*sigh* Just when Inu gets snuggy too. Oh, well. I see Shippou and Kirara being the only ones left to survive. Just cause she wouldn't be able to get to the well without help, that help being Kirara's flight, and Shippou's determination. Lets face it. A poor little kitsune and a fire neko trying to transport a nearly immoble woman. Besides, I see the rest of the gang putting Kagome on Kirara to keep her out of danger, and of course, Shippou would be with her. But that is just my take on the upcoming angst. :P TTFN!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 20:05 PST
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Ah yes, I have to agree with you about the aura. Though my computer suddenly stopped acting up *knock on wood*. So I'm sorta believing it's somehow scared off misbehaving... *knock on wood, once again* Heh. I probably will, that's in answer to your review, I was already thinking of doing it. Though I'm pretty sure my family, and soon my friends, were/will be freaked out when they heard/will hear me babbling on about three reviews. I suddenly can't type... ^.^ Okay, back to your fic, Kagome met Hiei, but she doesn't know his name. I like how you did that. Curiosity's a great mover. Especially for fire-demon's like him. Yep! Youko was on another continent at the time, so I doubt we'll meet him in the past. I liked the fighting scene! Naraku was being sneaky, attacking where they would have the hardest times using there weapons... though I doubt the others would escape unscathed. Shippou seemed to have disappeared during the fight... and before-hand. I feel like I'm babbling... ah well. But Kurama in black... K.I.B.? Youko in Black... Y.I.B.... ^.^; Kib and Yib, but no Hib(Hiei in Black). No, there was... That was random though... I couldn't help but notice how you but his 'followers'. It put a mental image of a bunch of brain-dead fangirls chasing after him, or stalking him unsuccesfully... with Hiei laughing in the background. That's basically all I have to say this time 'round. That makes sense anyways... Update soon! Or, whenever you feel like it!!! ^.^
| Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:44 PST
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More good chapters! Keep up the good work!
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