| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 23:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ya~y!!!XD Another wonderful story! I love how Youko is in here, not so perverted and cold-hearted killer that he is sometimes. Sometimes people make him really OOC and I hate that sometimes, there should be a law against that! Oh well, anyway, love it so far. One question... will Yusuke and Kuwabaka make an apperince(sp?) in here? Just asking 'cause I think it's funny the way you make them do things... hehe.:-) Hope you update this story and your others!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: February 15, 2005 21:23 PST
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*sigh* Just when Inu gets snuggy too. Oh, well. I see Shippou and Kirara being the only ones left to survive. Just cause she wouldn't be able to get to the well without help, that help being Kirara's flight, and Shippou's determination. Lets face it. A poor little kitsune and a fire neko trying to transport a nearly immoble woman. Besides, I see the rest of the gang putting Kagome on Kirara to keep her out of danger, and of course, Shippou would be with her. But that is just my take on the upcoming angst. :P TTFN!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 20:05 PST
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Ah yes, I have to agree with you about the aura. Though my computer suddenly stopped acting up *knock on wood*. So I'm sorta believing it's somehow scared off misbehaving... *knock on wood, once again* Heh. I probably will, that's in answer to your review, I was already thinking of doing it. Though I'm pretty sure my family, and soon my friends, were/will be freaked out when they heard/will hear me babbling on about three reviews. I suddenly can't type... ^.^ Okay, back to your fic, Kagome met Hiei, but she doesn't know his name. I like how you did that. Curiosity's a great mover. Especially for fire-demon's like him. Yep! Youko was on another continent at the time, so I doubt we'll meet him in the past. I liked the fighting scene! Naraku was being sneaky, attacking where they would have the hardest times using there weapons... though I doubt the others would escape unscathed. Shippou seemed to have disappeared during the fight... and before-hand. I feel like I'm babbling... ah well. But Kurama in black... K.I.B.? Youko in Black... Y.I.B.... ^.^; Kib and Yib, but no Hib(Hiei in Black). No, there was... That was random though... I couldn't help but notice how you but his 'followers'. It put a mental image of a bunch of brain-dead fangirls chasing after him, or stalking him unsuccesfully... with Hiei laughing in the background. That's basically all I have to say this time 'round. That makes sense anyways... Update soon! Or, whenever you feel like it!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:44 PST
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More good chapters! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:31 PST
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This story just keeps getting better! I'm very impressed with the way you handled the hiei/kagome interaction. Hiei wasn't too friendly, and kagome wasn't ridiculously trusting. I believe i've said this before, but your characterization is some of the best i've seen. Especially given the sudden influx of bad!fics that have been appearing lately, your fic offers a refreshing respite. I'm glad to hear you plan to continue this pace of updating. In order to keep your muse happy, i volunteer to act as a professional bodyguard, and supplement her/his salary with *digs through pockets* 23 cents, two hair ties and a piece of dentyne ice. But anyway, you're doing a superb job. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Niku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:16 PST
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I envy you. Your chapters just keep coming and coming. If I had your stamina all my stories would be done. Of course, I am also enjoying your story! It's so exciting and gripping! I can't wait for Kurama and Kagome to meet. And can't forget Hiei having a little secret. hehe. Keep the chapters coming, no pressure ^^ You rock!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But when are they going to meet? I want kag and kur to get together!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait to read more! Poor Kagome. I hope that she isn't too laid up and can't move because of her ribs. I am wondering how the initial meeting of Kagome and Kurama is going to happen. Will Hiei be there as well? What about Inuyasha? So many things happening at once!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait to read more! Poor Kagome. I hope that she isn't too laid up and can't move because of her ribs. I am wondering how the initial meeting of Kagome and Kurama is going to happen. Will Hiei be there as well? What about Inuyasha? So many things happening at once!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply get drawn into your writing; the story is definitively one of the best I've seen... I liked the new chapters; I really like how Hiei once interacted with her- I've seen Kurama do so in the feudal era, but it was never at all plausible or swallowable. Yours worked perfectly. I'm impressed. Again. I look forward to your next updates!
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooo love reading your fan fics! Please update this one...or one of the others...soon!!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed this story; in general I loathe YYH-IY crossovers based before the end of the shard quest, but this was incredible. I'm very much impressed at your characterizations, and I commend your ability to avoid the obnoxious cliches and pitfalls the majority of authors seem to be making these days. It's so hard to find good Kag/Kur fics! I was ecstatic to read yours. It's very good. I do hope you continue!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 19:58 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Hiei knows Kagome from the past 0_0!!!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 19:27 PST
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That angry aura Rabid was talking about? My compter had it too. An angry youko is *scary*! But again, like rabid, i'm glad to see you developing his character past the cliche blithe and egocentric kitsune he is in most stories. Hey, should we keep expecting such amazingly prompt updates, or is this just a temporary gift? Well, either way, i eagerly await each and every chapter. If i must wait a thousand summers, i will keep your story on my favorites list, scouring my inbox at each sunrise and set, waiting for that magnificent subject line: [MM.org - FanFiction] New chapter added to 'Commitments Made In Blood'. Don't let me pine for too long now! Ja!
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 19:09 PST
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WHO IS THE STALKER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ps pleaz update
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