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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 16:41 PST
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Alas I do not have AIM. But I slaved all day writing a one-shot... the joys of being sick. I think I've figured out waht my cat was looking at me with know the 'pay attention to me and nothing else you stupid human' glare. Which makes me think how glad I am that my head is my own... After all, I don't have to worry about making someone inside my head mad... And I can mutter comments and such without people knowing! That is one of the first times I've seen Youko get mad in a fic, mostly they have him pretty easy going, so it was startling, and I swear my computer was imitting an angry aura for a second there. In other words, it was highly realistic. Now! I'm going to go and sleep... or work on that dumb project of mine... so many choices... and I happen too be lazy. I have to agre with you about the word limit. I swear there is some sor tof sadistic pleasure involoved in getting a reviewer to type all they want to say, post it, then get cut off and forget what they were saying. THough of course, I'd find that amusing as long as it doesn't happen to me... so I shouldn't say much. Update soon! I need to mentally debate with myself what to do! Did I mention I liked this chapter? And that I hope you'll update soon?
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 15:44 PST
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Please update soon I want to know what happends next! Kur/You have to find her! I want to know what they will do when they finally find her!
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 15:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Squeek! I'm so glad you made it so that Kagome wasn't just a sudden pop-up, you know. I don't think I mentioned that last chapter. It's been a little peeve of mine for a while, to hardly ever see a fic like this. Because.. she's at home every now and then, at least, someone isn't going to just blink and notice a power surge one time out of all the other hundreds. More than one out of a hundred fics could realize that. O_o; And I'm very rarely on IM, but I'll be sure to sign on in a little bit, and add you. All new plot ideas much be nibbled on and admired. (Or possibly not. considering it's yours, though, I'll prolly like it. You've got my curiousity up.)
| Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 11:27 PST
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I have a confession to make. I've actually been reading this story since you started posting it, but this is the first time i've reviewed. I know! I'm a horrible person and an even worse semi-obsessed fan. Well, a bit more than semi- i suppose. But, on with the review! I really like the way you are taking the time to actually build on the characters' personalities. I'm getting tired of those stories wherein Youko sees Kagome immediately decides she's his soul-mate, and they end up having hot wild smex by the end of the first pharagraph. Not that i object to the smex mind you, it's just that i am rather attached to the idea that two characters like that (esp. kagome) would take the time to get to know each other before making a move like that. Other than that, i always love the way you portray the youko/kurama relationship in your stories. You're right in saying too many people just write youko as a sex-crazed horn dog/fox. You, on the other hand, have a talent for giving his character some substance. I really enjoy that. Well, i should probably go before i miss my chem exam. I look forward to your next installment. So update soon onegai!
| Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 10:16 PST
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Beautiful story! I'm sure you have heard it from me and everyone else, but I just love your stories. I have always liked the way you write the whole Kurama/Youko thing. Anyways, I don't really know what to say except you are doing a wonderful job as always and keep up the hard work. I'm glad its you that writing, becuase I might be able to come up with ideas but I suck at creative writing. Throw a scientific paper my way and it will be wonderful...but creative that side of my brain doesn't work. All those genes got passed to my sister. Don't mind my babble. Keep up the hard work and I look forward to the next chapter in any of your stories!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 07:45 PST
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Dang... You can run into the negative, but does it post? Nope. it's interesting though, I was at -19 words. Out of the 1500 I was granted. Now that I'm back at the top I'll finish proclaiming my love for your story. I love your story! ^.^ It's wonderfully well-written, has an interesting plot, nice wording. And I like your writing style! ....Wow, I sure posted alot of reviews... that's either in the morning daze I woke up with or it's doing with tthe fact I have so much to say... and most of it not really relating to anything in particular. Ah well, me being sick gives me more time to work on my story. My cat has also proclaimed his love for your story, but that could just be he's complaining at me for being on the computer... I think it's the former. I will stop my rambling now. So I will myself away to go bother other authors! Or my family... or my cat... or my muse, who likes to sleep in late. And likes disturbing class with ideas... *sigh* Ah well, Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86 (not signed in) On: February 14, 2005 07:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. And the fact your updateing so quickly is sooooo great. I can't wait to read more and see just where things go from here. And I love how he's already getting Kagome gifes I can wait to see what happens when they finnal meet. Well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 07:36 PST
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Okay! That's cleared up for me! I just re-read the chapter, and forced myself to focus. You know how you sorta read/skim over stories? The non time-consuming way of reading. Was developed in class to get through assignments quickly! But it's a hard habit to break, and focusing on what your reading, truly focusing, gives me more time to analyze your style of writing and the actions happening. Hm, Youko does seem more intense, *sigh* Now I have the urge to write him that way... Revision! Yay... *gets ready to hunt down writing bug* Hm, I'm curious, when you first write your story, do you write it in word, or on paper? I'm just curious, as I couldn't write anything worth reading in word if it has to do with a creative subject... for that I need to smell the ink, feel the pen mark the paper... let my ideas pour out slowly... I'm weird, and I'll be the first to admit it. Everyone else tries not to to spare my feelings... Anyways, Youko does seem far more 'intense' whenever he appears, this is me agreeing with Arbor. After-all, when you've had that much experience in life(be it good or bad) you would have a very rich character full of quirks and subtelties. Ah yes! Again, I like who you had Shuichi 'know' that Youko was a great thief, but not have the realization hit him until he actually sees it... And other than that, I like how you added Kagome's musing of her brother. I can also see that happening, I know! I'll just proclaim my love for your story before I run out of words! I l | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 07:15 PST
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Ah, the rest... I hope you don't get this too. It sucks. And is highly contagious. *growls at brother and sister who so kindly gave this to her* I think I just realized something, Kentaro is Inuyasha's descendant, isn't he? And that sword is the Tessaiga. I think. Heh, just a moment of dawning comprehension when Youko said there was nothing 'special' about the sword. And I noticed... did he steal Kagome's diary? or was I merely being unobservant? Ugh. Yes, in my fic, I think I'm going to show the more 'kitsune' side of him... :D But I have to agree with your observation that you don't write non-x-overs. Where's the fun in that? I love x-overs. And my friends all call me crazy for some odd reason... Heh, and there I go, rambling on again. I can't wait to read more! ^.^
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 06:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO GOOOOD!!!! Please keep up the great chapters!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 01:32 PST
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ok so now kurama knows sooo much about kagome but just one question how exactly did the domon that wanted the sword (lol i cant remember his name) know so much about kagome?????? pleaz update soon *sigh* today is the worst day in the world (valantines day) *cries* i'm sooo alone
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 01:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Continued..: And it's (the diary) a very clever idea on how to actually get around writing battles. o_o I'm amazed I never thought of that.. but then, I cannot write in first person. At all. It will never happen, because I am teh suck at it. =X So diaries will probably never appear in any of my stories. Heck, you should see my own diary. Its like a novel in and of itself. I'm a very descriptive person in it, and I tend to wax poetic to a sickening point. Why I don't do that in my stories baffles me. anyway, yes, I enjoyed this one as much as the other. I can only hope there will be another update by the time I get up. ;) And your sending of the plotbunnies worked, by the way. I probably got myself to write four times the amount I've been able to do lately. *covets borrowed plot bunnies.*
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 01:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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...You are a bad, bad girl. Bad. Really, seriously, Bad. A terrible, horrid wench. You.. you tease! Temptress, torturer, abuser! Cruel, mean, rotten child. Baiting, taunting, aggravating little imp. *waggles finger at you* Really. I mean it. If I didn't admire you, I'd strangle you. Don't tell me they're not going to meet anytime soon! It ruins all my hopes and dreams of fluff. Despite the fact that I think it's the better choice to establish the story firmly, I can still heckle you for not giving me cuteness. Augh. Bad. BAD. Really bad. *goes to sulk in corner* Gory scenes.. The first scene I ever wrote was an assignment from my english teacher. We were supposed to describe fear, without naming it. I got pretty grotesque. I could never handle battles, so I understand, but a still scene I'm jsut fine with. Battles = scary to write. I can handle the details just fine, personally, but I never know how to get everything fluid. I like the Diary idea: It let you describe the adventures from Kagome's point of view. Instead of hassling with everyone getting up, wandering around in circles, omigawd shards exclamations from Kagome. I'm cutting this into two. o_o I spent too many words insulting you to fit everything into one review. XD
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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o_o; If my last review got submitted multiple times: Sorry. My computer just completely freaked. Anyway; I really like the depth you gave to Youko. While we all love and adore Perverted and Shameless!Youko, it's always nice to see that he does know the meaning of the word serious. One teeny tiny thing niggled me about this chapter (besides the fact that you're teasing me, dammit. XD You did it on purpose, I'm sure, flaunting how close he was to finding Kagome. *shakes finger*) and that was the sentance 'I'm looking for a young woman with black hair and blue eyes that I seen a day ago.' The word 'seen' is not the proper tense, and just noticing that was the only place in this chapter that the flow broke, for me. (Oh, and by the way: while I teased you about holding out; this was a good addition. It gives the story more flesh and bone. I just.. like how you included that he had to give something up even to find out who she was. that probably didn't make sense, but ah well.)
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 22:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*Cheers!* Yay! You write so well, ugh. You make me want to write an IY/YYH crossover now. :P I shall have to resist the urge. Thats how I started writing IY fics, you know. I'd never seen/read any of it, and one of my friends wanted me to write it. I was in the 27th chapter before I saw my fisrt episode or Inuyasha. While I hadn't had any complaints about having them OOC, I felt rewriting was necessary anyway. Of course, I still haven't seen much of the anime. I really prefer manga to anime any day. I have plenty of plot bunnies, but they're all for my original stories. Evil bunnies. Other than that, I've only a massive amount of dustbunnies. Cute, but uninspiring. *twitches slightly in eager anticipation* Are they going to meet next time? *squeeks* I just can't wait to read the next chapter. Until then.. *determinedly opens word, to try and work on her own stories.* (Hah! Fat chance. I'm going to reread this fic now, you know. =X) (And just for the record: I often have people laughing at me. I'm glad I made you giggle, but the frequency that people laugh at me when I'm hardly a funny person makes me wonder. Just what are they laughing at, anyway?)
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