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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: athrun_lover20 On: March 14, 2005 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...I love you fic, but you haven't updated in a while. What happened? Last time you said it would be out bu that envening. Update soon (I'm going crazy trying to guess what might happen next. Please, Please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: March 12, 2005 20:48 PST
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Ive read alot of stories about kurone!!!!!!!!!!!!BUT IVE NEVER SEEN HIM! BUT HE LOOOOOOOOOKS SOOOOOOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! I NEVER NEW I GOT A PIC OF HIM IN MY ROOM 2 NOW LOL
| Reviewed By: SIT On: March 11, 2005 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you write your stories, you always put a little suspence in it. I love that as well as the fact that you always update. But I don't understand why you haen't posted any new chapters. P lease at least atempt to do so for all of your fans. Yours, germain.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 08:22 PST
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He he. I will. Thanks for the warning though.^^ He he. Silly Keiko thinking Naraku can be taken out that easily. Tsk tsk. Yay! Shippo! I like this story Kuronue and Shuichi in the same story ,in the same room!'Course I get tons of that in COS.
| Reviewed By: Tsukiko-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 13:00 PST
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w00t u updated! I meant to review a long time ago..........but i'm kinda one tracked minded *finds hand interesting and looks at it for an hour* well any way I hope u update soon or I'll threaten u with little chibi hiei's in thongs...trust me thats an interesting and disturbing site at the same time since i have them running around in my head *had room in my mind ever since i lost my sanity* also i seem to have a bondage kurama in my mind rocking back and forth and twitching now and then...........well any way I hope u update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:19 PST
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Reviewing again, I just wanted to get this out of my system 'cause it keeps on getting at me. *idea chomps at my head* Jeez, I'm getting to it, damn idea! *idea walks away whining* Okay, what if Kanna, since she can, suck out Youko's soul out of Kurama's body into her mirror and then once the gang gets Youko's soul back but somehow by some struck of unluckyness they Youko and Kurama have seperated bodies for awhile. Phew, finally got that out. Jeez, I thought I would never get it out but my muse insists me on doing it as a idea for a fic but i need a plot to it... hm, I'll have to think about it! Anyway, great chappie and please update!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 11:50 PST
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Hahahahahahahaha!!!!>.< OMFG! That is soooo funny! I am laughing my ass off with that review response about the 'huge mistake situation'! Gods, I didn't know people can be so dense, it's unbelievable. Really, how can anyone mistake with our Shuichi with the one in Gravitation? *a chibi Kurama nods his head* Hey, wheres Hiei? *chibi Hiei tries to reach frezer but is to short* There he is! Isn't he cute! I just got him at a book store the other day with Kurama at a sale they had, I was so shocked they had dolls of them! *Hugs the chibi dolls* I think I'll find one for you too, if you make another chapter. Just tell me what you want and I'll get it since you are one of my fav authors! *hugs you and lets go* Anyway, Naraku better be ready for our favorite Spirit Detectives or he's going to suffer a curel fate! Please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 02:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...So I realize I've reviewd (twice) for this chapter, but I was re-reading it and a few things struck me. First, ch. 14, there's a typo. lol. You put "he longs"... when in context it should be "he longed". anyway... I'm curious still as to your plans concerning Sesshoumaru. I mean, he wanted to kill Inu-Yasha, but I think he'd take offense at the cause of his death being due to another; and he'd blame Naraku due to Leiko's actions... afterwards, however, he may very well try to attack Kagome. ...Sesshoumaru getting upset with Koenma; toddler verses Taiyoukai. Paperwork vs. Toukijin...! As well, I really look forward to Hiei / Naraku iteractions. I mean, you said that Naraku offered Hiei an alliance way back when... will you be alluding to that occurence more? I didn't recall nor did I see that scene in earlier chapters. ...Once againl I loved this chapter; I love your writing, and I really love seeing Kagome's stubborness facing off Youko's possessiveness. ...So if Inu-Yasha hasn't been reincarnated, but will soon... as I trust you to remember that reincarnation means starting as a baby... [it drives me crazy when someone is "reincarnated" in a story and becomes an adult immediately!] I was thinking... Inu-Yasha as a possible offspring of Kag/Kur? but then again... Oedipus complex to the extreme! ick!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 22:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[chuckle] you might suggest to rabidfangirl101 that if she's going crazy with the review word limit (Which annoys me to no end, as well!) that she try to review on fanfiction.net when she's got a lot to say? I actually think it'd be sort of funny if Keiko and Kagome did not, in fact, ever really get along. I mean, this is sort of random, but they always become *best* friends soon after meeting in the majority of the fics, and, well... Kagome's a whole lot less accepting of things than Keiko, in my opinion. It'd be interesting if they didn't click. Not to say that I'm asking you to make them hate each other, but... you might want to consider them never becoming all that close. Besides, at least to me, it's always seemed like she gets along better with groups of guys than groups of girls.
| Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: March 04, 2005 20:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ another chapter!! weee!Can't say much since I got to get off the comp, but I really hope you update again soon like always!i wanna find out what happens ^_^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:09 PST
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-apsed. Hiei's taking care of it right now... *n=bites word limit but limps away in pain* Erm, bad idea... Anyways, if some of the crowd collapsed, others would go closer to check of they are okay, and the smart ones would get out of there right then and there. Then there are news teams that are going to be covering this. It seems to me many secret's are going to be revealed this day. Though of course, with Naraku's healing abilities, it's entirely possible that his wounds may heal before he gets outside, so he won't poisen the crowd... but that also would be less dramatic. Hm, it's entirely up to you as an author. Kagome and Shippou are really the only ones who know how to fight him and survive, how long will it take the Reikai Tantei to figure out the miasma? Will it be too late? Will I have been killed by a really mad Hiei who just escaped the small room with the word limit in time to read the next chapter? *gulp* I think it's time to enroll in the witness protection program and get jumpy about any and all shadows I see. It suddenly got very chilly in here... I'm in hiding! 'Till then! ^-^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:02 PST
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I mean. Okay, back to your story! This chapter nearly had me on the edge of my seat in suspense as you are basically setting up a huge fighting scene. From what I can tell, this will either be the final battle or a short skirmish. I have no doubts Kagome's going to try and escape to help them, or maybe she will succeed, I don't know. But I know she is probably going to try and help them at the very least. Kagura... is no doubt close-by to where the spirit detictives are, and I have the oddest feeling Naraku is ready to 'reward' her. He is bringing in Kanna after all, and Kanna has the ability to suck out souls... even Kaguras. It almost seems as if Kagura has out-lived her usefulness to Naraku. Ah! You're going to have Kanna suck out Shuichi or Youko's soul, and that is something Kagome will know, and she will get down there, and do... something. Exactly what I don't know... You are the author. Or none of this may happen, and you could be sitting there wondering 'what the hell??? as you read it right now. Or laughing your ass off, either's possible. Hm, what's going to happen to the crowd outside? Are they all going to die? There is going to be a crowd, c'mon, they all thing he's just a normal human who has issues and is holding a girl hostage, not some half-demon from the feudal era who is intent on taking over the world and corrupting a kitsune's mate. If he walks out now, everyone in the crowd will die, they can't really run from his Miasma, and even if some do coll | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:53 PST
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*advances on word limit with drawn knife... actually, sticks Hiei in a small room with wrod limit then runs for the hills, with internet access* Phew, as I was saying, Why can't people just appreciate a work of art like this when they see it? It is a little gruesome, true, but that adds to the realism involved in this story. Blood Sacrifices for the plot, these characters should feel honored! Even if they are emotionally scarring Kagome as they die... Anyways! I drool whenever I see a new chapter is out, it just makes me happy. Content I guess you could say. I'm odd in a way that the written word makes more sense to me then hearing something, but that's just the way it is for me. And I guess I'm practically in love with your writing style, it moves me so! I never know whats going to happen, nothing is predictable, everything makes sense. Sometimes I'll hit my head at having missed an obvious twist, but know there was no way to have predicted it... or maybe there was but I won't get bogged down on details such as those. I enjoy the review responses at the end, they brighten up my day too see one of my favorite authors interacting with me and the other reviewers. Hell, you could almost say I hero-worship you at times. But I don't want to place you on a pedastal and pressure you to try and live up to foolish expectations... I feel so idiotic writing this... I guess I'm not used to admitting things like this. I'm a beginner at confessing feelings then, but I'm sure you know what
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:44 PST
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O.O Someone thought this was a YYH/ Gravitation x-over? *snickers slightly, okay, she's laughing... she fell out of her chair, hit her head, all because of the fact she can't see how someone can be that oblivious...* Anyways, I really can't see how someone can do that... but then again, I'm 'observant' and a near Kurama replica in mind. Heh, I do have those days, but I usually just laugh off whatever stupidity people throw my way. After all, I've basically convinced myself that 'if I don't respect someone, they are obviously inferior to me and have no idea what their saying.' That's arrogance for you. I printed the picture out and gave it to a friend for her birthday, she's a Kurama fangirl. She shoved it in random people's faces while I laughed my head off... she was trying to convince herself she didn't like it. But I cought her carrying it around in her binder later... ^-^ You got Hiei's nickname wrong, it's His Shortness, 'He' to imply he's better than the rest of us, and a capital S and H because it looks cool. I'm pretty sure Kurama would like the nickname, just not in the degrading way I would say it. Though of course, I'd have been killed by His Shortness and The Bat before I ever had a chance to meet him... so it matters not. Is it me or were you pretending to be Naraku in this chapter, and the police and Keiko's friend were the flamer's and idiot reviewers? It's probably just me... but I can't help but wonder. Why is it people can't appreciate a work of art when the | Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting, very interesting. I bet there will be one hell of a fight unless they are going to take theri location into the consideration ;) ....by the way remember thoes "dream sequences*(ah not sure how to spell that) " Kagome used to have, where InuYasha visited her...I was wondering what is going to happen to him (unless of course i missed something or it is just not important ) Anyway, another good chapter, hope you can update soon!
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