| "Ranma 1/2: The Truth and the Tempest" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... I've read one of your fic's too now, as you requested, and it's really good! You write well, so it's easy to read. The story drives itself forward well too, and the plot is exciting. This story is worth going back to to read more once you update it... You're good! Now I'm gonna take a look at your other fics... :)
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Title: Thanx!
Reviewed By: Ukyo-chan On: August 23, 2005 05:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thnak u sooooooooo much for updating. OMG! Shin-kun is attracted 2 Ucchan! but what will happen 2 Konatsu? He'll be crushed if Ukyo n Shin-kun get together!! Please update the next chapter quickly. Dyin 2 read it. thanx again.
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Reviewed By: ranmamaniac On: August 06, 2005 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fics are awesome i can't wait for the next one pleeeeease update soon
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Title: ur fic rocks
Reviewed By: ranma_krazy On: July 27, 2005 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fanfic rocks da house down!! im lovin ur story n im dyin 2 noe wat happens next. please update quickly. thanx. please include more Akane n Ranma moments in. its very cute. i would like 2 see some more love. thanx again. :)
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Reviewed By: mel sanzo On: July 25, 2005 11:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again an amazing chapter. I love the way how akane was so possesive bout ranma. BTW, are u going to pair up Ukyo with Ryoga or Shingen? Anyways, I hope you update soon. May you chapters be long and your reviews positive.
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Reviewed By: warlord2005 On: July 24, 2005 09:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY THE HELL HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED YET?!!!!! I've been reading your fic for quite some time now, and I have to say, this is the best Ranma 1/2 fanfic I've read. Very creative polt twist on the Jusenkyo curses, and doesen't require too much of a streatch of the imagination where the origanal series is concerned. I liked how you had Ranma and Akane open up not just to each other about how they feel, but with themselves and all their faults as well. As for Shampoo's curse/possesson rearing its ugly head, do you mind if I make a few predictions? I predict that its going to send Ranma's neko-phobia to new hights, and Genma, in a justified fit of OOC'ness, is going to redeem himself for his past wrongs by heroicly helping Ranma conquire his feer of cats (and maybe even master the Neko-ken) and thus Purge Shampoo's demon and destroy it. Afterwards, Genma, while nowhere near out of the doghouse yet, will be set on the path of redemption (shorta) and Shampoo will be faced with the truth of her own mental weakness, and have only Moussee to turn to. That's how I'd write it, if it where my fic. It it not my fic however. It is your fic, and I beleive without a doubt that whatever you choose to happen will be nothing short of brillance worthy of Rumiko Takahashi. NOW UPDATE! I'M BEGGING YOU!
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Title: Woah....
Reviewed By: Rozenwyn On: May 25, 2005 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez... only 8 reviews? I'm shocked.... This is a REALLY good fic, and I'm glad you write such long chapters. I just wish real life was kinder to you, so you could update more frequently. ^__^ No pressure, just the truth.
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Reviewed By: Nihaoranma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah... this fic is VERY cool, I love how you keep everyone in character, and Ukyo's reaction to Ranma's actions is very realistic, and is definently something she would do.
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Title: niceeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reviewed By: mesky On: April 07, 2005 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. Pllzzzzzzzzzzz tell em when u upate. Melanie_sanzo am member email when update okay?
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Reviewed By: Aila On: April 05, 2005 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic! The ideas you use are so.... so.... COOL! Your spelling and grammar is perfect,you update frequently, only a few new characters, the plot is awesome, no one is OOC, and so far you have used all of my favorite pairings! All in all, I believe that his is the perfect fic! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: March 08, 2005 12:10 EST
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Well from your story so far, Ranma can now morph at will and won't need water to activate his curse. Shampoo is out of the running and Mousse well he'll be a friend. Ukyo has just in her mind renounced her father and wants to be Ranma's friend and Kodachi deserves to be put in the asylum... as for Kuno another swift kick of reality is needed and perhaps him to finally back off... I hope nothing happens to Akari cause Ryoga's demon is starting to corrupt the lost boy and the sooner they find him the better... maybe Nodoka doing something to Genma in the future as soon as Mr Panda is gone for good would be good as well. Apart from that, it's a good series to read and really should have more reviews, Hint Hint to all those lazy fuckers out there
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Title: Taro M.D
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 13:16 EST
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I like the feel of this story, of course i have to thank you for reviewing After The Chaos, like on Fanfiction this story has the potential.
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Reviewed By: Tsuyujimo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a little confusing, but technically - it makes sense. Does Akane almost drowning have anything to do with the story?
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Title: Cursed Spring of Akane
Reviewed By: Inu-ears On: February 20, 2005 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I was wondering, since Akane fell into an empty spring and it created The Spring of Drowned Akane---since Kimi--or whatever her name--turned into Akane from getting splashed with the water---that would mean that Akane, technically, HALF-drowned in order for the spring to activate, B/c the springs remember whoever or whatever drowned there and take their forms. So...Shingen said that whatever has fallen into the pools has drowned--therefore DIED and that many creatures were lured there, even water agile creatures, to their death. So, it's impossible for any LIVING thing to have a cursed spring named after them since they had to have drowned and died in the spring. So...how does Akane play into that? By all means...she either should be dead or should not have a cursed spring named after her. But she is LIVING proof of something, rather someone, who fell into a spring. So how is that gonna play out in the story? It SHOULD have some significance.
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Reviewed By: Tsuyujimo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What? You didn't get any reviews at all? That's horrible - this fic is great! I REALLY want to know what happens next too so please, PLEASE, update!
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