Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: rukawa_yumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 14:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
A surprise, indeed! Nice pair. Or should I say, trio? Hisashi and Kaede with a touch of Sendoh? Not bad! In fact, I love it. One thing though: "I have a surprise for you" he leered at the slightly smaller boy. Rukawa looked at him before he sighed. ---> I pretty sure Hisashi's the one talking here, ne? No? 'Cause the shooting guard's actually shorter than Kaede. So you wrote it the other way around. Hehehe ^-^ It's ok, though. Love the fic!
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