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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 04:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Well you can either leave it or rework it but please do not delete it i would like to see were you would go with it.
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Reviewed By: Ashley555 On: July 10, 2007 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it so far. Please continue it. I'd be much obliged ^.^
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Reviewed By: Gothicgirl8892 On: February 17, 2007 23:32 CST
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Love the story and would appriciate it if you coud update sooner and about the paring i think kagome should go with yuiki and thoru with kyo!
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Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 15:03 CST
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Hey r u going 2 update or what? Please i'm begging u, update!!
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Reviewed By: Lady_Midnight not logged in On: June 16, 2006 17:00 CDT
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Keep going its a really good story so far. and those bakas dont like the rape then they should not read it. a rape in a story can ether kill the story or make it all the better it all depends on how u write the rest of the story. i would really like to see how this turns out. i vote for Kagome/Kyo ^__^ hoping to see an update soon
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Groovygirl On: June 07, 2006 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic. It was good the way it was. But i'm sure you could do muc better.
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Reviewed By: lina_inverse_the_dramata@yahoo.com On: April 19, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, don't take your story down because people got offended. Rape is out there. I should know. And it isn't pretty. It's horrible, its painful, degrading and rips you of something that you never ever fully get back. You were taking this story somewhere... take it there. There are stories on this place up to chapter twenty something, rather good stories I might add, some with less then three reviews. Just keep writing. Yeah there are gonna be pissed off people, but if they're angry, there's a reason behind it. And it's not just because you 'dared' to put in such an explisive scene, (hell, I've read yaoi BDSM that make your story look FLUFFY and light) it's because reading the scene hit a nerve. No one wants to be that helpless. No one wants to think they might not get saved. That's a scary thing. This is a dark subject, but keep writing anyway cause I'm sure you've got a great plan for it. Just because people people can't face this, doesn't mean it isn't out there.
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like ur story so far and its not the first I've read were Kagome was raped. I look forward to more chapters though soon.
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Reviewed By: me On: April 09, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
add i like it. so many posabilitys
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: April 07, 2006 21:03 CDT
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i like it alot, but if you want to change it, its your call...
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:33 CDT
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hey! itz alright. I dont care if you take it down or not. I think itz good as it is already. but if you cant think of NEthing to add to whatz already up there then feel free to take it down so that you can make your writing better. Good luck on accomplishing whatever you decide. LATERZ
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Reviewed By: Go Drink Pine-sol [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should have tohru with yuki and kagome with hatori or akito ^_^
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Reviewed By: HieinKagome'sluver05 On: February 02, 2006 22:34 CST
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Review ASAP. Great story. Is there any pairings.
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Reviewed By: Sich On: January 25, 2006 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, but i feel bad for kagome, Being rapped after trying to save a girl? But im Masochist so i don't mind, im also a bit sadist ^.-
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Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG POOR KAGOME!!!POOR TOHRU!!!!oh god I don't know what to do if that happened to me!!well I vote for Kagome/Kyo and Yuki/Tohru PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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