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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: December 23, 2005 14:07 CST
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so far i really liked your story, and i know exactly what you mean about going into detail about stuff like rape, and i believe that you are not wrong in doing so just because others think its too much. your story is now in my favorites list, and i cannot wait until you update. i have a good feeling about your story...its gonna be really good. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 10:22 CST
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I want Kagome to be paired up with AKITO! and I want Tohru with KYO!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 23:43 CST
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OMG! Kagome being raped. how devastating! Im very sad now. I hope that the Sohma's find her soon!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence (not signed in) On: December 22, 2005 12:37 CST
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where the heck did i get the idea tohru's rescuer had a sword? huh. Anyway, while i'm not a huge fan of rape scenes myself, i can handle them if they serve a purpose, as yours seems to. as distasteful as it was, there's no getting around the fact that it was well-written. i'm really looking forward to finding out what pairings you plan on using. it would be great if we didn't have to wait another year for the next chappie, but i have a feeling the wait would be worth it. either way, i really hope you update soon. i want to see where you're going with this. happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: Kyo_Honda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! i would verry like to see more and i wanna know /WHAT HAPPENS TO TOHRU?/
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Reviewed By: mrs cake On: December 19, 2005 12:32 CST
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How could you do that to kagome you big fat meanie!!!!!!! Ithink you are so evil and not in a good way!!!! I'm so mad i can't curse!!! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Oh well, *pout* thank God it's not real at least put her with yuki or a MALE akito they are so fine!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 19, 2005 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad... in a sense. I don't like reading rape very much. Hope you update again soon though. But... could you tone it down on the rape. And what's the pairing? Please let Kagome be paired with Hatori? Please?
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Reviewed By: Me On: December 18, 2005 23:22 CST
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Good flaming GODS, girl, put up an "explicit rape scene" warning at the top of that last chapter. Some of us really REALLY don't want to read that. PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: blckangel On: May 30, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i juz love ur fanfic.... okie i'll try 2 guess maybe the guy is uummmm... Ranma?... nyweiz u have kidz??? wow... im only 14... hehehe...
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 19:55 CST
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You must finish this. And is this a YYH crossover?
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. Please update soon. I really want to know who this person is. I think I may have an idea, but I'll never know if i'm right until you UPDATE! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! Thanks.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: tinak14206 On: March 05, 2005 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like your story so far please update soon i well like to read more ~~~tina~~~
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Reviewed By: Konstantine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 20:30 CST
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LOVEYED IT!!!! your are an awesome writer!!! course i suck hahaa!! i cant wait till the second chapter i wanna see who the person is!!!! update soo please!!!! -Konstantine
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Reviewed By: xxDyingInsidexx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 16:58 CST
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i like it!! your a really good writer and i hope ya update soon!! please update! its for the fans haha i love it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 17:46 CST
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Wow. Talk about starting with a bang huh? Hehe. Bang. I made a joke without realizing it. ... Anyway, I really need you to update soon. I have absolutely no idea who this mysterious person could be, since you never said what the crossover is with. The fact that he has a sword though is very encouraging. I really can't make any comments on whether you have managed to avoid OOCness since the characters haven't really been put in a normal situation yet. But, if you update soon, I'll be able to give you some more feedback, and you like feedback, don't you? So, don't leave me hanging here, post the next chapter, and keep up the good work! Ja!
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