| "Moods" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries at the happy ending that was so well-written* OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
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Title: Sara R.
Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story:) It was very cute. If you write a sequel, can't wait to read that, too!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your stories and i feel like such an idiot! when i read the part where rin shuts off the machines, i thought they were gonna let the baby die because of her heardbeat and breathing! lol and im soo happy that didnt happen lol... i like the way it ended too that was cute ^-^ ~Silver Moon Dragon
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Reviewed By: morwen_reNLI On: March 19, 2005 18:10 CST
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i so loved the story! and you almost had me fooled into thinking that the baby had died! evil author! but then again, that's a good sign ^_^'. i hope to see more of your works soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 15:44 CST
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i thought it was good. keep up the good work.
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Title: Sweet_T_cocoa_86@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 13, 2005 22:42 CST
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I liked it to a point but I think it could have been better. And in the nameing of the children, come on!!! Use a little more creativity!!! Sanku and Kagami, Kagomi or whatever the hell you chose. I loved the lemons and the lemonade. The sequesl could have come with a little more thought but I like it none the less except for the above mentioned dislikes. Well Good story keep up the good work and improve it in areas. Love MN
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Reviewed By: c[= On: March 13, 2005 17:39 CST
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that was great!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwwww it was cute and sexxy =) good good
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: bloomluvrchick On: February 16, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that is so sweet. you should write chapters for this one.
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Title: BOO
Reviewed By: YAWN On: February 03, 2005 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS OKAY BOT ITS KINDA BORING! SORRY >_
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Title: I Loved it
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say other then i wish you would continue this story and make it into a little family story. Just do something like what it's like to be married and in school and right about to have a baby. Hell, maybe i should be writing one like that if i want it so bad. Maybe, but i rather have you because i love the lemon that you had and i really liked the plot. Please write another one-shot that comes off of this or something.
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Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 15:00 CST
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You did pretty good for you first full lemon. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon. SOngie ^_^
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Title: Loved It!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No offense, but I don't like it when the words are all bunched together. Anyway, I LOVED your story!!!!!!! It was so sexy. And ALWAYS remember:FLUFFINESS ROXX!!!!!
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