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Title: Get more self confidence.
Reviewed By: j0 On: January 30, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, you don't suck. It wasn't bad at all. Write a sequel. I look foward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: Fusion Blaster On: January 26, 2005 00:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Dude All I want is the implied fucking sequel.
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Title: Needs some work
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: January 25, 2005 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to work on your spelling and punctuation. At least a good spell checker can help. Other than that, it was an enjoyable fic
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