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| "The Jackal and the Innocent" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 10:22 CDT
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Aww, Yugi is so innocent. I'm a mixture of innocents and tainted shadows. I can be sweet, but I can be rather evil when I want to be. In fact my name means 'bitter' in Hebrew. Anyway, Great Chapter!
| Title: Incredible!!
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this, unfortunately I am not getting alerts from Media miner and missed when you updated. So sorry that this review is so late. This was a wonderful sotry. Awesome job!!
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Some of your other reviewers are just weird. Not that I'm not weird mind you, but still. I do happen to agree with one of them in that you should do a sequel! That was really friggin amazing for a last chapter and it kinda upset me that it was the last one, but there's always room (and me hoping) for the sequel! You know, if you write more, I'll be back for it. I'll keep reviewing for you. SO, please write a sequel? See, I CAN be good and nice, I'm not threatening...Though it's really hard. *chuckles* I'm either really nuts right now (stayed up all night and haven't been to bed YET) or I'm really calm/sane. Only minus the sane. Either way, I'm begging you (BEGGING YOU) to write that sequel. I'm too tired to say much more other than I really loved this and want if not more of the same, at least similar. Keep writing and people will keep reviewing. Besides, you should know that half of the people that don't review love your story, they're just too lazy to do/say something. I know I was tempted once or twice not to review for the hassle it presented, but I decided that I liked the story too much not to say at least a little something. Now, I'm sidetracked I think and I know I've confused myself.... -.-' I need to go to bed. I'll probably end up re-reading this several times, but I just want you to know now that it was great! I'm going to go crawl off to my bed now. Ja.
| Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 28, 2005 04:12 CDT
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I'm here again, I just finish reading the last chapter of Innocent. I have to say is the inter story was FUCKING aswome. (A brighten halo with angel flying around it appers)Please come out with a sequel to this story. You can call it Innocent 2. There one more thing I have to say and that is:(puts on a cheerleader outfit and picks up pompoms) Go Yami, Go Yugi, Get freak on, Get freaky with good ass fucking sexy selfs.(blushing uncontrolbly)
| Title: Wow.... O_O
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: July 24, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D&L: Wow...O_O THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! X) Yugi didn't accept it too easily, but at least it worked.... Yami: I'm glad it worked. ^-^ Yugi: Me to.... I guess... ^-^;;; D&L: Oh well.... WAIT, HOW DID YOU TWO GET HERE!?!?!?! O.o Y&Y: Ummm, we came through the door? ^-^;;; D&L: Ugh.... I MEAN HOW DID- Yugi: Ummmm, we were bored? ^.^;; D&L: Okaaay... That was lame.... -_-;;; Yami: *mumbles* Not like you could give a better answer... >_<
D&L: THAT'S IT!!!! >.< *Attacks Yami* GRRRRRRR! Yami: *Dodges attack* HEY! >.< SO YOU WANNA FIGHT? YOU'RE ON!!! X) D&Y: *Are fighting* GRRRRRR!!! Yugi:Well ummmm, R&R peeps!!! ^-^ Pwease? *Does cute puppy-eyes* D&L: *Has stopped fighting* Ugh, TO CUTE!!!! ^-^ Yami: Yeah.... Can't resist Yugi's cute eyes.... ^-^ All: R&R PEOPLE!!!!!!!! ^-^
| Title: Yugi
Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 20, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 3 of the Innocent is relly great, but in the overall conculsion, all the chapters are brillent and you finish this as soon as you can. Your chapthers left me longing for more and moreand more every time I read the storys. So please, pleaseeeees, pleaseeeesssssssss write more of innocent. Dont leave me longing for more.
| Title: O.O Woah....
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: July 18, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Woah..... THAT WAS SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FICCIE!!! PLEASE COUNTINUE!!!!!!! Hehe, wonder how Yugi will react after that... X) Hope he won't hate Yami alot, because it would be sad. ;.; (Even though I'm fine with drama and that is what's probaly happen...)
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cackles insanely* Mwahahaha! I'm glad threatening made you write faster! *calms down slightly* I really did like this one too and it just makes me even more anxious for the next one. I HAVE to know what happens, what Yugi's reaction is! Moving on, The Talk-o-matic has become my fav threat for my fav authors so it still rests, but I'm going to add a new one too! I will reprogram, or at least bribe the Talk-o-matic so that if I DO end up sending him, he'll dye your hair pink as well using his non-stop chatter to drive you crazy! You don't want hot pink hair do you? If you do, I can always get him to hang my patented Piano of Doom over your head and send you a shipment of plotbunnies! I'm sure if nothing else the plotbunnies would get you writing, maybe not what I WANT you to write, but writting none the less! *snickers* Really though, keep up the good job and the little blue-green Write Review button/link will get up and smack people until they do! I know it attacked me as soon as I finished reading your latest chapter! So, in all, Keep up the good job, write more or suffer my wrath, and hurry up with the writing! I have no patience! Though I can wait a few days... And another weird saying that has nothing to do with anything: "Have you ever felt like it's just one of those days?" "It IS just one of those days."
| Title: Still a great story.
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 07:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this. Please update soon!
| Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: Lady Deathstrike [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story... plz update ASAP..
| Title: Great story!!
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just found this and I really like it so far. Update soon. Don't wait 6 months please.
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smacks self on head* Jeeze, I'm soo stupid! I've liked your story for the longest time and I only reviewed once! Well, I reread the new version and I love it! Really though, you still need to write more because it's so good! See, I'm still here and I'm still waiting. Even if I acted like I was dead... Moving on, I have found a good threat! You need to write more or else suffer! If I don't see more of your wonderful story soon, I will send you the Talk-o-matic to drive you crazy! It now comes in little brother form and talks non-stop for hours on end! You'll wish for a mute button, you'll wish for an off button, but it has neither! It's guarenteed to rant, rave and obsess about a multitude of things you probably wont care about! *snickers* So unless you wish to suffer this horrible fate and be driven crazy, WRITE MORE SOON! And one other thing that has nothing to do with anything: You have been abducted by aliens, have a nice day!
| Reviewed By: Shadow of the Light On: May 16, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You have to update soon!
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must write more soon, 'cause I HAVE to read it!! I promise to become a most faithful reviewer if you do!! PLEASE?!? *gives puppy dog eyes* I hope to see more of the story here soon, or else you WILL regret it!! I don't have a good threat yet, but I WILL come up with one! So hurry and I wont have to and you gain a faithful reviewer in the process! I will be waiting!!
| Reviewed By: cair On: January 25, 2005 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!!
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