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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story. I hope ull add inuyasha as the father.....and heres some advice, if u want to not ruin the story all u can say is that Shippos instincts were wrong and have kagome confront inuyasha in her time, and so on.
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Title: Sesshomaru
Reviewed By: Mendy On: February 22, 2005 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thimk it should be sesshomaru. It would make the story more interesting if he was yhe father.
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Reviewed By: NO SESS On: February 21, 2005 17:00 CST
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Why would Shippou and Kilala help Sesshomaru? It doesn't make sense. Why would Kagome suddenly be happy to have Sesshomaru's baby when she is in love with Inuyasha? You have major plot holes and it will ruin the story to force Kagome to be with Sesshomaru.
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Title: it is me again
Reviewed By: me On: February 21, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
something is wtong with this stupid review thingy. i can't read my reviews. i only see 15 of them and i know there's more than that...
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 14:19 CST
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Sesshy. It's just the most resonable cause Inu would have known if it was his. He'd be all protective and stuff like how Sesshomaru's being. lol I loved the part with Shippo & Kirara. I love the story. Next chapter PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 14:17 CST
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make inu the daddy, i like inu. but i also like sesshy. but if u make it inu then i would b right. ^_^ i cant decide. well i like inu just a teensy bit more than sesshy. but it wont kill me either way.
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Reviewed By: Sirencry On: February 21, 2005 08:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sesshoumaru all the way!!!! (as the father) great story, btw. ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 01:59 CST
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I thought this was an Inuyasha/Kagome story. You should have told us at the beginning that it is not. I'm not reading it anymore.
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Reviewed By: whimsy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:50 CST
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Should end up IY/K. They do love each other. If Sess is the father, just why would Kagome fall for a rapist? And why would she stop loving InuYasha? There is also the matter that Shippou and Kilala have betrayed people who thought of them as friends by agreeing to keep Sess's possible role a secret. Shippou's apparent preference for Sess over InuYasha and the reasoning demonstrates that even to Shippou a hanyou is always inferior to a full youkai.
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Reviewed By: Inu_4_Eva On: February 20, 2005 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it but...I wanted thre story to be Inu/Kag...if you MUST have the father to be Sess, can you still have the story somehow be with Inuyasha and Kagome together?
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 20:02 CST
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very interesting. I'm going with Sesshoumaru myself. Oh the tension to come! hehe update soon please
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 02:41 CST
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Soooo... smells like him all the time, huh? Man, I'm beginning to wonder if I WAS right....hmm, please continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight dammit i thot i was logged in! On: February 17, 2005 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! luved it! update update, id really appreciate it. this is so kewl, im still waiting 4 who the dad is so i can confirm my suspicion or find out that its totally wrong. CONFRONTATION! i luv it.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 21:55 CST
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0.0 poor Kagome, she thinks Inu hates her. What's Inu thinking? Why does she always smell like him? Bc of the baby, she should smell like the father. Why would Sesshy need to talk with Kagome? PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: February 16, 2005 19:05 CST
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Keep it coming! I am really enjoying this one. Ah, horrid cliffie! Update it soon! Wlfhund
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