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Reviewed By: WolvenJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:43 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! It's like readoing an actual book! I want to write an FMA but I know so little of thier personalities cuz i'm kinda new to it still. The angst, the plot, the description i love it!!! The Roy torture is great too! It's just a great fic and i hope you keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: wintrycynicism On: March 27, 2005 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, well, I do have to admit that you manage to use the crasser words for a better style. Very impressed. Can't wait to see what happens.
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Title: Um... Stuff...?
Reviewed By: Amelia On: March 25, 2005 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite fun to read and I really hope that you plan on updating rather quickly before people forget about it. ^.^; I sure won't though. It's just too good to be forgotten. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Fenixwing On: March 20, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best fullmetal fic i have read yet i can't wait for the next chapter plz get it done soon
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Reviewed By: yippers On: March 09, 2005 22:51 CST
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This very funny and the characters stay in character too! Please update!
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Reviewed By: rowe On: March 07, 2005 15:38 CST
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I just finished fma, and was dying for some good fanfiction. Luckily, I happened to come across your writing :) Based off of the few other fma fanfics I've read, I would say this is by far the best, especially in terms of keeping our boys in character. It's been some days since you've updated, but I hope that doesn't mean you've forgotten it! Thanks for sharing :)
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 05, 2005 03:41 CST
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I'm very intrigued by the pairing. Mustang never appeared to be narcissist to me. Edward didn't seem to be that much of a brat either. Did you make that up or do I never catch these little details? Still though, I'm reading my first FullMetal Alchemist story ever and I like it. I must ask, what's with your love of smoking?! Okay maybe not love but... *growls* no sir, I don't like it. It seems almost silly to get worked up over such a trivial detail but I have reasons. I almost felt a pang of anger when Edward took out the cigarettes, almost. Yes, very unusal. I'll give you this much though. Your stories have been one of very few to actually get me worked up over rapes (in fiction that is). A serious implement that was too watered down and used in fics to be taken with more then a, eh. It made me like the Colonel for a moment, just a moment though. That in itself is a two hour conversation, that probably can be summed up into two sentences. *shrugs* I babble needlessly and lose my train of thought. What was I saying? Oh yes, you made a marvelous romance. You make me want to read the Weiss Kreuz novels you wrote even though I've never seen the show.
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Reviewed By: LP Gurl (2 lazy 2 log in) On: March 02, 2005 22:50 CST
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I love your story it is soo great! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you capture the two guys just great. There should be more people like you. Please update soon! Ja ne!!
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Title: For Chap 3
Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 23:07 CST
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Finally, the next chapter! Now I'm a little confused... is this set in the future somehow from the first and second chapters? I would love to see a little RoyED action, but not when Ed's so young! Other than that... Damn that Hughs, spying on poor Ed like that in the bathroom! I would want to kill the man as well if I were Ed. Too bad he didn't finish the job after all... though it will be great to watch Roy begin the chase! Update soon, ok? Hopefully sooner than this past one... a month in between such good chapters is really such a long time for us poor readers to wait, ya know! *snickers*
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Title: a.k.a Rikku-san from FFnet
Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 15:20 CST
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I read this on FFnet and was kinda hoping that maybe, just maybe you'd have the next chapter here...oh well, guess it was just wihfull thinking. I really love this story, though. It's so well written and everyone is so in character. It's been far too long since I've read a good Fullmetal fic, I mean, sure there are good stories out there...but this is just...I don't know how to describe it. I agree with Charleston (whoever that is) and I think the next chapter should be latter on in the FMA timeline. Please, update soon. For all your fans and all the RoyED fans!
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Reviewed By: charleston On: February 13, 2005 20:16 CST
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sweet, touching, well-written, and in character. quite the accomplishment! there better be a new chapter up soon, written a couple of years in the future (you know what i mean! ~.^).
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Reviewed By: fluffyinuears On: February 03, 2005 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... wow. two long chapters... >.< they were soooo good that i stopped typing my speech entirely and had to finish reading! ::pout:: hopefully i'm not gonna be late fer school... keep writing! fueva wityuh--
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great :) There really aren't enough decent FMA fics out there. I love the way you described Mustang's train of thought... the way you made him so protective. ^_^ And Ed was perfectly in character too. Great job!
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 22:58 CST
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So, I started reading this story with the antisipation of some Roy/Ed action. Being a fan of Sublime, I recognized the title and immediately my mind went to thoughts of "G.I. Joe Kung Fu grip" wickedness, but instead I found a rather touching and sweet moment in the lives of these two alchemists. Well done. I continue to be amazed by your writing.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in) On: January 27, 2005 21:12 CST
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Man, I haven't read a good FMA for ever! Even if this didn't have smut... *sighs* Oh well. You should do a smut of these two though... Of course legal and all! 16 and over is no longer considered jailbait, depending on where you are in the world. Can't go wrong with smut! LOL This was very well written, I'm quite impressed! And with Mustang on the verge of love with the young boy, man you could really work with that. What a blast!
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