| "A Whole New World for Shinji and Asuka" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Mr. Foo On: August 24, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made it seem good by the title because I support shinji and asuka, but I got sooo bored by the first chapter. Its all, "fuck me please" with no plot. It just seems to be strictly for extreme extreme perverts. To the author I say dude, get a life so you can fill it with other things than boring stupid lemons |
Reviewed By: blacklord13 On: February 02, 2003 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good. TO continue is really up to you. To me, its seems that you pretty much said there is need to be said. |
Reviewed By: Lil Asuka-chan On: August 17, 2002 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ENJOYED IT. very lemony ;keep writing; yeah don't stop writing just keep doing ya thing. when you come with something new holla at me ya heard!?
Lil Asuka |
Reviewed By: Melsa On: March 04, 2002 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome i rated because i just love sex books.i love to here about it. PLLLLZZZ!!!!dont stop the story there. maybe u could do somethin like auksa gets hurt really bad. and like they dont no if she'll makeit... but in the middlie she makes it...i dont no im just saying... i mean im not good writing books..but ur great.i no one preson doesn't make a difference but plzz dont stop the story there!!*gets down on hands and knees beging u while saying DON"T STOP IT THERE!!! DONT STOP IT THERE!!!* come on plzz dont stop it there!!! and who cares about ur grammer ...well maybe u do but i dont. |
Reviewed By: Tan656 On: February 05, 2002 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fanfic just improve grammar and spelling great |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
