| "A Whole New World for Shinji and Asuka" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: IT's better then it looks
Reviewed By: Tempesta2nd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT's a good fan fic but I'de like more chapters. I've read this many time an is still good.
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Reviewed By: adfae On: May 02, 2005 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
A terribly written fanfic that shouldnt be allowed on this site.
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Reviewed By: VendettaTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wall of text/10. Literally an unreadable story. I'm not going to try to read it all if you haven't even bothered to use paragraphs. My head was hurting after the first chapter. Infamous is definatly not a good thing in this case dude! Reformat it and I'll give it another look.
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Reviewed By: EvaSkiman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry im slow and left something out my other review, but just remember that a story should end when all you have to say is said. Other wise it ruins the expierience.
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Reviewed By: EvaSkiman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have much to say so im going to say it quick. I really thought it was good. I didn't keep with the story at all but It was still good.
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Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why the hell did you get some bad reviews!? Yes, there were some gramatical errors, but the story was still the same and still enjoyable. I'd like to see more. -Raven-
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Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: March 31, 2004 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to say, you overrated yourself completely... not great at any part but luckily for you, some ppl seem to give greater value to amount than teh quality :P
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Reviewed By: Endless Nights On: December 31, 2003 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you are infamous as you boisterously say, why do you have no more than ten reviews? i'm no famous person but i get at least ten per chap. tsk.
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 17, 2003 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Use....a....freaking....spellchecker. Overall, a very normal, so-so lemon. Not BAD, mind you, but not exactly a landmark piece. Anyone can write about sex; not everyone can write with a sexy style.
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Title: and one more thing..
Reviewed By: Mr Foo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a horrible writer
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Reviewed By: Mr. Foo On: August 24, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made it seem good by the title because I support shinji and asuka, but I got sooo bored by the first chapter. Its all, "fuck me please" with no plot. It just seems to be strictly for extreme extreme perverts. To the author I say dude, get a life so you can fill it with other things than boring stupid lemons |
Reviewed By: blacklord13 On: February 02, 2003 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good. TO continue is really up to you. To me, its seems that you pretty much said there is need to be said. |
Reviewed By: Lil Asuka-chan On: August 17, 2002 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ENJOYED IT. very lemony ;keep writing; yeah don't stop writing just keep doing ya thing. when you come with something new holla at me ya heard!?
Lil Asuka |
Reviewed By: Melsa On: March 04, 2002 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome i rated because i just love sex books.i love to here about it. PLLLLZZZ!!!!dont stop the story there. maybe u could do somethin like auksa gets hurt really bad. and like they dont no if she'll makeit... but in the middlie she makes it...i dont no im just saying... i mean im not good writing books..but ur great.i no one preson doesn't make a difference but plzz dont stop the story there!!*gets down on hands and knees beging u while saying DON"T STOP IT THERE!!! DONT STOP IT THERE!!!* come on plzz dont stop it there!!! and who cares about ur grammer ...well maybe u do but i dont. |
Reviewed By: Tan656 On: February 05, 2002 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fanfic just improve grammar and spelling great |
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