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Reviewed By: Scissors On: March 16, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story but i think that Audie is a little to bossy to the others, mainly since she is a guest there, other than thet I really like your fic and cant wait till the nextchapter is posted.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 17:30 CST
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YAY UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:30 CST
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Oh, by the way. In Japan, you stay in the same class all through your high school years. So Yuki and Kyo would still be in the same class, the only reason I know this is thanks to a small authors note in Marmalade Boy. I just thought that you might want to know that it don't much matter if you put them in the same class. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:28 CST
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yay!!!!!!!! um...hey update again soon. What's the 'deep veil secret' thing about? It has to do with her family doesn't it. Or maybe her birth. Ok, I'm gonna stop. I failed divination, I only passed one test by a lucky guess. Was this at one time a cyoa? cuz there's parts like 'she put on your other shoe.' If it wuz, you'd better check for that. My friend did that too. Well, I'm gonna go finish the rest of my leftover b-day cake now. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:49 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing and my friends also love your story.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 21:10 CST
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just update your fic damnit!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 18:06 CST
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Update again soon. Audie found out, sorta. well, gotta go. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 18:01 CST
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:42 CST
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Update again soon. It's gonna be interesting if and when Audie finds out about the zodiac. So, this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:19 CST
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Um, are you aware that chapter three is exactly the same as chapter one? Well, update again soon. This has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:29 CST
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awww.... it didn't work....
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:28 CST
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_ ( O> I__) W haha... it's a bird....
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh..... question... ??? why did you repeat the same chapter?? Update!!! Oh and Sukiam6... leave her alone and stop pestering people. :P
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Reviewed By: Sukiam6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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I don't know....although you yourself may not be 'audie' this strikes me as an self insertion, I'm not really a big fan of these however.
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