| "Cheaters" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: xinbra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2021 04:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm surprised nobody did a comic of this fic.
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Reviewed By: Anthraxus of Oinos On: November 23, 2004 23:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, apart from the rather strange and ridiculous start and the bastardization of Daisuke, there's nothing to say.
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Reviewed By: The Real Unknown; unable to login On: September 19, 2004 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Robster remember me? anyway you finally finished this fic huh? cool so what are you going to do now? Hey if you want to get back in touch with me just tell me. See you.
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Reviewed By: wiseman On: September 12, 2004 21:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting story and i've read his other works and it takes a sense of creativity to write lemons and in someways tk is alot like yugi anyway so people shouldn't feel that bad
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Title: Cheaters.
Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 13:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
Blue Rag up in here ain't no slobs here cuz!
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Title: leadfoot3520
Reviewed By: leadfoot3520 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 18:45 PST
Comment/Review:
this is a very good story its just i am a big fan of koumi i just think it works also i think you have to go into more detial about the charters thoughts and feelings
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Reviewed By: NeoCloud On: October 26, 2003 22:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man I've read some of your fanfics and I think they're pretty great. Not a fan of incest but it wasn't written in a sick way at least. And all I gotta say is shut up DavisFan! I havn't seen you produce anything original.
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Reviewed By: Millenium Dragon On: May 12, 2003 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really grossed out by the "nightmare". still finish the story. |
Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 09:31 PST
Comment/Review:
well done |
Reviewed By: shadow On: February 19, 2003 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is very funny and a big chaos whit the misunderstandings
great job |
Reviewed By: Twilight Steel On: January 08, 2003 22:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, im not trying to say that the story wasnt good, but i really like fics better when they stick better to the way characters im the show really act. You have like ALL the DD's completly OOC(i cant stand when the put the DD's OOC), and some of your dialog is just...corny. sry but thats what i think. |
Reviewed By: nightmare On: November 19, 2002 15:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. its awesome, especially the parings. MIMATO, TAIORA, TAKARI RULE! a lemon with a plot, whats better |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 03:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
Everyones going chaotic in this story lol. By the way is it going to explain what made Daisuke\Davis semi-evil in the first place? Just wondering cause he wasn't anything like that in the anime. |
Reviewed By: Rater On: October 03, 2002 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice work as usual my man! Your TK/Nancy chapter was great. And you got in every pairing just enough to make evryone happy, Good work.
-Rater |
Reviewed By: A-man [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 19:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M SORRY BUT ROB THIS IS NOT UP TO YOUR USUAL WORK I MEAN, YOU JUST RUSHED THIS TO MUCH, I KNOW YOU WANT TO FINISH IT AND ALL, BUT C'MON DONT EMBARRASS YOURSELF. |
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