| "The Journey Home" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: lsia On: June 13, 2002 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read your fan fic up to the latest chapter and it's I liked it alot. Ya really left me hanging on the "Friends or Foes??" chapter. Ya havent updated! *sniffle* Please try to to it soon!
Thankys! |
Reviewed By: Hota chan On: June 05, 2002 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, could you update this fanfiction? I'm almost dying here.... ONEGAI!!!! ^_^x |
Reviewed By: Speed On: May 07, 2002 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a powerful fanfic. I totally look forward to seeing future chapters. The emotions of the characters are readily accessible and real, and the interaction is very believable given the original series. The author pulls out devices that are believable and original, and near seamlessly weaves a story about the Kenshin universe that is at once both believable and compelling. The author is gifted. |
Reviewed By: Molo-chan On: April 04, 2002 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi! It was sooo good! Please update soon! Ya wouldent wanna leave a fan hang'en, eh? |
Reviewed By: lunamiss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good and well developed fic. I think it could be made better with some grammar editing. Other than that, this was a really enjoyable read. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Silent Solitude On: March 19, 2002 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... It's good. It's just a little off, though. There's something that's slightly implausible about it. I know, I know... it's an AU... but if it's a fanfic, shouldn't the characters be more in character. However, your writing style is really enjoyable. Keep writing~ |
Reviewed By: che the all-amazing, all-power, all-purpose curse word O.,o On: March 18, 2002 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't say about the originality/creativity 'cuz this is the 1st kenshin story I've actually really read O.,o I think... *rubs back of head* anyway I wasn't really looking for spelling/grammer so don't take my word for it? and i have a feeling the next few chapters might be a bit more interesting then this one (who knows why i chose to review the 1st chapter O.,o) and the style of writing- well that i really don't know either O.,o I don't know much do I???? but i think overall i'm a bit confused by the whole story only because i only have 2 samurai x videos (which i watched the 2nd one first mind you O.,o) and a kenshin movie along with 'reading' the mangas in spanish O.,o since i don't know like ANNY spanish, that really doesn't work does it??? so i confused myself and don't know exactly why i'm writing this reaview or telling u all this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *continues to rub back of head* |
Reviewed By: Xara On: February 13, 2002 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! It's so great! Update soon please! I wanna know how Kenshin's going to react to his son, now that he's back!! Update! Update! |
Reviewed By: Susy On: February 03, 2002 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an original fic. I havenīt read another like this. I want to know how does the story ends. |
Reviewed By: abz On: February 01, 2002 04:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic is really interesting! i really like it...but you left me hanging...what would happen next?!?!?!?!? i can't wait! onegai continue... onegai |
Reviewed By: Smooch On: June 24, 2002 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why??? I was soo into it...then it stopped. Yeah, it's hard to write sometimes, I'm on my third story and yet I haven't finished one yet!!! Well, I hope ya update!!! |
Reviewed By: ali-chan On: November 26, 2001 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Sugoi!!!! Beautiful story! The characterization was exquisite and the plot was believable. I also liked the concept of the Moral Matrons. Very original =) I understand your busy but please please please continue the story soon, ne? ^=^ Keep up da good work girl!!! And don't leave us hanging tooo long!!!! =d |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 29, 2001 14:38 CST
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I'm very impressed with this story. The pacing is good and the Moral Matrons, unpleasant as they are, do add a touch of realism. Please continue the story. |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 14:12 CST
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Well, I was impressed with the first chapter of "The Saga", but I'm absolutly blown away by the first chapter of "The Journey Home". This is really good and I look forward to reading all of your works. You are a very talented writer! |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime - bunny On: October 30, 2001 18:05 CST
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great story so far. can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the great work!! |
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