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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (too lazy to sign in) On: February 16, 2005 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
w00t! Good chapter! So Duo is avoiding Heero and blaming himself now? Will they get to meet eachother in the next chapter finally? I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!
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Title: Ch.1
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds like a promising story. I really like the original idea. I haven't come across anything like this. I wonder what you have planned for all of them. Will Heero go through with getting the artificial voice box? Or if he doesn't will he use some sort of sign language? And what of Duo? Will he be rushed to the hospital as well? So many questions! Update soon, I'm looking forward to it!
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