| "Kuro no Fuyu" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: justaperson On: September 02, 2007 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
completely unreadable. Please add paragraphs so people can read this.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: February 25, 2005 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
hey it was really good i liked it but i do want to tell you that you need to put it in paragraph form other than that i like it thanks;)
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Title: Washuu
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable; hope you plan to post more soon.:)
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Reviewed By: Sa8erGirl101 On: February 05, 2005 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you you need to write more so when i see this agin thare had better be a new capter here or elas!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it was really awesome and everything, but lik, you might want to space the fic out into different paragraphs so that the reader doesn't lose interest by reading just one long paragraph like an essay! good job though!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm yes true, fighting usually leads to places that teach you to fight. another good story, are you going to continu it? if not okay. Zirra
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