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Reviewed By: ukeduo On: May 18, 2005 16:15 CDT
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WOW! , please keep going , at first it was scary to read but i kept on and its got better
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Please update soon!! I can't wait to read what happens next. I feel so bad for Duo and Solo too, they were just getting back together.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Firstly, thank you for submitting your chapter to FFARG! I spotted several grammatical problems that would benefit from a good, solid beta, and while the story started out a little disjointed and hard to understand, the overall chapter is carefully contrived. The only things that bothered me were the use of the term 'bro', and if you're using it as a nickname or pet name, then it should be capitalized. If it's there just as a noun, then it needs to be lengthened to 'brother'. While I cannot comment on OOC or storyline since I am not familiar with the fandom, it was a disturbing chapter (which I gather was what you were after) however I must offer this word of warning: using sensationalist tactics like incest/rape is something that must be done both sparingly as well as with great caution. Overall, a solid read, and I think that with a little work, you will have a really sound foundation for the fiction! Thanks again for submitting to FFARG!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally read the rest and I'm looking firward to the next one. Poor Solo
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 19:20 CDT
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Hey. >_< I tried to get to chap 6 from my computer at home, but couldn't. I got to read to smiggin of it during school but.....damn english teachers! I liked it and will review again when I get to read the rest of it. Ja matte ne.
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Title: Different
Reviewed By: vox dei On: April 02, 2005 17:18 CST
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I enjoy your style of writing, and the interesting AU you created where Oz/Romefeller never gets off the ground. Are we going to see more of Quin, and maybe get some insight on why he did what he did? Great job so far. aquononascendet at yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 20:27 CST
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This is really great. You got the whole psychology bit down. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 13:13 CST
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Can't review much, must nap BUT! So cool! Your grasp of the psychology of Duo is so great. Of course, abuse is not great, but this fic is amazing. The characterizations and the cliff-hangy-ness. Wow Yay for more updates ^_^ Go you!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 13:42 CST
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Hey! You gotta finish! Write more paleeeeeeaasssee! It sounds great. Do it or I'll sick a herd of plot bunnies onto you! *cackle laugh* ^_^ Update!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 06:55 CST
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DAMN YOU MEDIAMNER!! stupid posting and postingness. I will try again, but shorter: Okay....... write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 06:54 CST
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Ah hah! Another reviewer. Good then, so now you know I'm not the only one liking this. So so terribly upsetting when a parent takes the abuser's side unknowingly. It's like you wanna go right into the fic (or RL household >_
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 07:13 CST
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This is a pretty good story, I hope for more soon
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 19:52 CST
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Why the hell am I the only one reviewing? Anyway, I am so interested by this fic. I love anyhting with cool or good psychology behind it. And! I'd love to get to know the characters more. I think it's always so heartbreaking when things like parents not knowing, or willfully ignoring their kids issues when one kid pits himself against another. Really quite terrible, but damn a well written story is still a well written story. Continue! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 22:17 CST
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YOU WILL WRITE MORE! So says the Tygrrlyli. Sorry, but it's just the way it is. I mean, wow, child abuse in real life sucks, and it kinda sucks in fics too, but a different cooler way. Sounds kinda messed up upon re-reading that. But I'm not known for my discretion, so there it shall stay. Regardless, I am terribly enthralled with this fic and think you should really and truly continue it. Thanks much for writing! ^_^
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