| "The Ultimate Friendship: Vegeta and Pan- Baby Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: SMiler2K2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pan is very cute so is Bra. The part about Vegeta calling Bulma a whore and bitch was pricelss. It had me rolling on the floor.
Sorry I haven't had my medication today. |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: April 06, 2002 05:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! So cool, Pan was always my favorite character. :) |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: January 24, 2002 10:50 CST
Comment/Review:
This story was so cute, I loved it. The scenes with Pan and Uncle Vegeta were great. |
Reviewed By: ????? On: January 20, 2002 22:37 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is sssoooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!i love it!!haven't read your other saga yet but i bet it's as good as this |
Reviewed By: andy (andrea) On: December 20, 2001 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, thats all there is. |
Reviewed By: Candy_b On: November 24, 2001 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reson why I like your fan fic is because a;; of the charactors are al in there right personility rang. I say that because some of the fan fics I read the charactors are all out of charactor. I also like your fan fic because i thought it was Soooo Cute!!! I know the next fan fic "The Ultimate Friendship" with Vegeta, Pan, and Goku will be just as good as the first fan fic.
~O.o~ |
Reviewed By: me On: October 30, 2001 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is very good!!!
Can you mail me when the next chapter is up?????
(at alwinhans@hotmail.com)
Your a good writer.
Kisses from me. |
Reviewed By: Myself On: November 06, 2001 10:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta and Pan... Oh... K. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 13, 2001 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
IIIIIIIII llllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee your story. it's so cute. I haven't seen anything with pan yet, still on the Majin-Buu saga. bleh. it's really good. keep writing i beg of you. k, bye.Ps. more vegeta and pan fics. |
