"The Pheonix Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: anime_fan120 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 18:34 CST Comment/Review: Very good so far. i cant wait to see how its going to turn out with Phaelyn and the Justice League! Whay oh why did you put that cliffe in here...oh well! not like i can do anything abou it!!please please please update soon...i can't stand waiting even though i know how long it takes to write.
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Title: NICE Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 21:16 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i just love everything about this. the ooc thing is ok. i'm not seeing to much of a change in the characters. so, as far as i'm concerned, it's all good! ^_^ anywho, loving it! update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 13:46 CST Comment/Review: The fit has hit the shan? that has to be the worst pseudo-cursing I've ever heard. I like this though! continue as you can!
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Reviewed By: ravenfan#1 On: May 21, 2005 15:27 CDT Comment/Review: please finish!!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 16:49 CDT Comment/Review: I really like your story. It's really awsome!! Anyway, I can't wait for you to update^.^
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 17:20 CDT Comment/Review: very cool. keep going. and wtf are huggles!?!?!?!
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Title: Cliffy Beast! Reviewed By: Ron (Teen Titans fan) On: April 21, 2005 22:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely awesome! The only flaw... THAT ENDING! That damned Cliffhanger Beast should be caught, muzzled, bound, and HEAVILY sedated! *glares at evil cliffy beast* But otherwise it was fantastic! Please keep it coming! ^_^ The story brightens up my otherwise dull and dreary days with cheer and joy and all that good stuff. I've been thinking about writing one of my own, but my ideas lately have been... *coughs* Kind of unimaginative. You have a cliffy beast; I have a muse with the suckiest sense of humour imaginable. *curses muse* Ah, well. I'll keep reviewing as long as there's stuff to review. And undoubtedly wishing to maul your cliffy beast in every one, since he (or she?) doesn't seem to be goin' anywhere anytime soon. -_- Ron
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Title: The Cliffy Beast! Reviewed By: Ron (Teen Titans fan) On: April 21, 2005 22:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely awesome! The only flaw... THAT ENDING! That damned Cliffhanger Beast should be caught, muzzled, bound, and HEAVILY sedated! *glares at evil cliffy beast* But otherwise it was fantastic! Please keep it coming! ^_^ The story brightens up my otherwise dull and dreary days with cheer and joy and all that good stuff. I've been thinking about writing one of my own, but my ideas lately have been... *coughs* Kind of unimaginative. You have a cliffy beast; I have a muse with the suckiest sense of humour imaginable. *curses muse* Ah, well. I'll keep reviewing as long as there's stuff to review. And undoubtedly wishing to maul your cliffy beast in every one, since he (or she?) doesn't seem to be goin' anywhere anytime soon. -_- Ron
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Title: lolololololo Reviewed By: Malchior 2 On: April 21, 2005 15:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 14:54 CDT Comment/Review: UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: soul_stealer_25 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:16 CST Comment/Review: Dude, I really like the story so far. But you really need to update! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: gothic_raven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 09:26 CST Comment/Review: update please!!!by the way its really good!!!
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Reviewed By: goth_chick On: March 05, 2005 09:12 CST Comment/Review: its really good! i think that you should add more about ravens past in the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 07:21 CST Comment/Review: still really really good. you might want to try to add something more about the demons that destroyed his planet when you have him describe about his heritage and family and stuff like that. other than that, its reeeeeeeeeeally good.
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 09:51 CST Comment/Review: heyy this is an awesom story! and thanks for the review btw, :D lol neway def keep writing so that we can see what happens next! and if you haven't noticed, the only reason sp & Gr are any good in mi stories are because of spell check. hehe but thats beside the point! keep writing, its really good with no holes where misinterpratation *did i spell that right?* can happen
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