Title: I liked it.
Reviewed By: Nekuyasha :) On: February 16, 2005 09:03 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a shame that you can't find it in you to write more for this story. It was really very gripping in the first couple of chapters. You write a very convincing embittered Duo. I'm not sure what to make of Katie. Your story yanked at the heartstrings, which is something I look for and appreciate in an author. I can also see where this kind of story would be hard to write. I get TOO into the characters and stories I write. I end up really 'feeling' what characters do; that's what makes them believable, heartwrenching even. I would have a hard time writing this. Heck, I had a hard time just reading it. I look forward to reading other fics by you. This snipet is proof enough that you are an author worth following. KUDOS!
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