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| "Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: jaegar70 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2013 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. | Title: 5 years after
Reviewed By: MR_Inanis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow mmm it has been a while since i readed this fanfic for the first time , and i find myself amazed by it again, a really good work. only complain is that kim has not wrote in mm.org for a while, hope she is ok M.R. Inanis
| Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow...bloody fucking hell wow...that was beautiful! I can't even begin to describe your ability to describe Shinji's unrelentless love toward Rei, and how Asuka's obsessive love over Shinji is what ultimately destroys her. You've in fact given me some insight into Asuka's personality. I swear, this is one of the best, and most beautiful pieces work I have read yet. This is infuckingcredible. I have never seen such passion nor devotion into such a fic. One of the best stories ever. I knew that Rei had a cool calculating mind, and that Asuka was possive and competive, but this really took their abilites/weaknesses to a whole new level and not even I could've come up with. I swear, this is one of the best reads. I know I'm being repetitive, but it's the only thing I can really say right now, because I can't even being to find words to describe your work, especially with my limited diction. But none the less, I love the way how you've made Asuka like Ritsuko, just as Rei like Yui, and how Shinji is an even worse bastard then his very own father. I love it, I love it, I love it!! Well anyways, that's all from me. Cheers ^^ Ja ne
| Title: pen name S S Shadow
Reviewed By: S S On: June 05, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No one knows what the human mind is truly capable of making us do until we're presented with all available options and then backed into a corner, forced to make a decision. I was truly pleased with what you wrote, and enjoyed reading it, any attempt on my part to tell you how much however would be doing thise piece of literary work a terrible injustice. Your level of talent in this field is at bare minimum that of a professional. Though I may not achieve it myself, your work has inspired me to try and do better with my own. I hope to see more from you in the future. On a side note, there were a few small, but easily correctable spelling and/or grammer error, Ja ne.
| Title: !!!!!!!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 21:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
*&!%... forgive me titling your other work incorrectly "...I read Truly Happy Together before this..." This is a mistake to anyonw who has read the previous review. The *correct* title is "So Happy Together." Again i apologize for the mistake and to anyone else who wasted time trying to find a the story in my previous review.
| Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this one was...different... Not that being different is bad. This truly is a dark romance, but i'd have to emphasize dark. Hmm...i feel like stating a bit of wisdom before i get down to reviewing. Hate, love, and obsession are deadly things on their own. The blindness of both love and hate can cause people to do crazy hings. Its influence expands into everything, consuming its victim. However, when you combine it with the self-destructiveness and possesion of obsession, you get a truly lethal mix of emotions, actions, and thoughts as a result. Now to the review. Your style here is solid in that it portrays everything that needs to be said and you do a good job of it. The only reason i have for not giving it a 10 is merely because of personal preference. However, there is nothing wrong with it that i can imagine =P. Your spelling and grammar are only a bit off in several places, but otherwise is just fine. Despite that this was a rather...dark fic, i loved the originality of it. This is a side i truly would have not thought of. Again (I read Truly Happy Together before this), you have done a wonderful job here. Congratulations on your exemplory work. Good job and Keep it Up!
| Reviewed By: Dcwestby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.. A quote strikes me... "... I mean, these guys are just OBSSESSED..." From hitch hikers guide to the galaxy.. Excellent writing...
| Reviewed By: Dcwestby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. quite different.. yet quite true... Gendo obsessed with yui... Asuka obssessed with Shinji who was obssessed with Rei... Very good.. Obssessions can be quite unhealthy... Myself, I kinda think Asuka and Shinji are more compatible then Rei with Shinji is, but as in your previous story I reviewed. Rei x shinji does have possibilkities... Good writing.
| Title: Lord Of The Flames
Reviewed By: ShinRyuKen 'The Human Torch' On: April 21, 2004 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
While yes, this is a very well written and dark piece of work, I think there is something you people are neglecting to realise. These characters are NOTHING like the characters from NGE. Nothing at all. Kimberly took their names, slapped them on some new characters, and said "There, that'll do." If this were a piece of original fiction, I'd give it a much higher rating. But she tried to pass it off as a piece of Evangelion, and it just didn't work. Sorry.
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Pandapeep [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I mean this is really amazing, and yes its dark, distrubing, graphic and wrong on so many levels, But that's the whole point. Eva is not a happy go lucky giggle at everything anime, Its a exploration into the tortured psyches of the main characters. If you've seen the last 6 episodes of Eva and End of Evangelion, then this shouldn't both you! Its obvious that the author know these characters well, and to those who keep bring up the point that Shinji wouldn't have gone to heaven, well Rei, a divine being, as in a angel, so she could bring him to heaven. I personaly love this fic, its just so perfect, and will defend its right to exist till the internet ends.
| Reviewed By: rgreat On: December 29, 2003 09:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Thats a best NGE dark fic i read. Bah, some peoples are just hypocrites and snobs. Not to mention bad mannered. Review just to say that you are hate it? lol guys keep it foy poor yourselfs.
| Title: none
Reviewed By: no name On: November 25, 2003 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i really should read what the author says at the begining of the fic that was depressing i feel sad it was good but sad oh so sad do you like screwin with the pilots live well it was great!!!so keep up the good work i still think that was depressing
| Reviewed By: Cain On: February 25, 2003 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful...dark and yet beautiful, your skill is superb. And your imagination boundless. I salute your style. On a side note...whatever happened to SO Happy Together? | Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: January 27, 2003 07:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's go down the hit list, shall we?
We have love, hate, obsession, betrayal, jealosy, insanity, murder, and necrophilia. Did I miss anything?
Basic synopsis is that Shinji and Rei get married. Rei dies during the birth of their daughter. Shinji is having sex with Rei's souless body. After several years pass, Shinji kills his daughter to bring Rei back. Auksa kills Rei. Shinji tries to kill Auska as a result, but, in a move of self defense, Auska manages to kill Shinji. Auska tries to kill herself, but is saved by Misato. During Auska's near death experiance, she sees Rei, Shinji, and their daughter as a happy family in Heaven.
Now that we know this, I wish to point out a little or big problem with this fic. First of all, "Thou Shall *NOT* commit murder". This may be my opinion, but I'm under the impression that if you kill ANYONE, God does not let you into Heaven. You would go straight to Hell.
I'm not sure what inspired this fic. It was way too dark, angsty, and morbid for my tastes. I have to agree with TommyRude and Lord Deathscyth, this fic should be banned from the internet. Don't read this fic unless you want to be permanently scarred. This is quite a shame though as this author's other work on this archive, So Happy Together, is actually quite good.
I cannot really give this fic a proper rating. If this kind of thing is your cup of tea, then by all mean have at it. Personally, I hated it.
Kimberly, nothing personal, but this fic really pushes the offense factor to new heights. | Reviewed By: PearlWind On: October 17, 2002 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Kim, it's been quite a while, isn't it =)
Like most ppl, I've been caught by real life... but it didn't alter my otaku's hunger =)
Hmmm... I never had the occasion of reviewing this (in ?)famous fic... which thing I'm going to fix now.
You (and some "great" reviewers) will notice it, my rating seems random, I agree... But to be honest, I've never been fond of lotery, so here the "why" :
- Your style of writing is off course unmistakable... as usual, it hits our eyes (I do hear some complains thought ;p); Sp & Grammar, well can I say more...
- For the creativity... some ppl will agree, well... very angsty... but so realistic, given the darkness of EOE (shudders). Having the nerve to blurt it on paper (or txt files ^_~)... Well, if you were a guy, I will praise you as the new Lord Ironballs *laughs* (no offense Kim, all in pure fun ^_^)
- For the last ratings... Like I said so often, I like giving positive feedbacks to authors... it doesn't mean I'm ready about kissing @$$es (*cringes* Sorry... me and my big mouth). So I admit frankly, yes, that fic made me feel... uneasy.
My general opinion about "Obsession" : to let the choice to the readers...
Good luck with your other fics and real life, Kim.
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