| "DOOM Group goes to Highschool!" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lily (You know who I am) On: February 26, 2005 20:36 CST
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YES! Rebecca go bye-bye! Stupid Mary-sues....but the went bye-bye too!! WHOOPEE!!!! -cough- exuse me if i sound a bit...hyper....i just had a soda. awwwww....valon cries! there's a site/thought i'd never thought i'd see/think! good job and update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 15:07 CST
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-sigh- naive Yugi....you'd think he'd learn one day, but then again, that would take away the cuteness! -imitates rabecca- YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGI!!!!! ugh....sometimes rabecca is seriously annoying....other times....she's a smart ass....other times, she can be helpful, like the hacking part into kaibacorp's system. ah, well, the world aint perfect! UPDATE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 14:11 CST
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GREAT! My personality so rocks! I almost killed tea! OOOO! i sent her to switzerland! whoa....valon and dinobrain think i'm cute! O.O Actually, having valon thinking that isn't too bad...but, DINOBRAIN?! whoa...good job! i really enjoyed it! update asap!
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Reviewed By: Yenchna and Kentuski [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"M ADDICTED!!!!! I love this story! Valon is friends with Yugi..... man that would be scary! I can't stop laughing! Pegasus kissing Keith, gross! Man this story is amzing. I like it how rexx shos up I man he's like never in againthing so it funny to put him in this and just completely make fun off him! Keep it up Must read MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! Luv, Yenchna
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (too lazy to log in) On: February 20, 2005 10:42 CST
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Dukey?! DUKEY?! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Dartz: "I WANT YOUR VIRGIN TEENAGE BODY!" that's just hilarious too. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'll be in your next chappie! I'll email my info to ya...
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Reviewed By: alonegirl (login broke) On: February 19, 2005 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hilarious. I love your work and this is just awesome. I quoted yo form this story on some of your lines during a project and almost failed because I quoted the "inapproperate lines from a vulgar story" Well the class wouldn't stop laughing sooooooo I still got a semi good grade PLZ update if not I will have to send minions of stupidity after you and make you really dumb for every class project ever until you update
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! you updated! Now my evil frying pans of doom will have to wait for someone else to attack! ^_^ that is, UNLESS YOU DONT UPDATE SOON! bandit keith and the paper boat was just hilarious...update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 19:19 CST
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HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWDY! I luv it! i can so imagine yami marik saying that! drunk pegasus kissy bandit keith??? ROFLMAO! keep it up! or else, i shall send my evil frying pans of doom after you! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! -coughs- excuse me...i had an evil moment there....^.^;
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Reviewed By: Yenchna and Kentuski [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 18:27 CST
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I LOVE IT! It just keeps on getting better an better! OMI GOSH! Keep it up! Yugi is so dumb and I love it! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Luv, Yenchna xoxo
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so funny! DDR? GREAT IDEA!!!! I so luv the DOOM group too! SetoxAllister is the perfect idea, and the whole DukexDartz hint is kewl too! I also think that your wording of how the fan girls drowing in their own drool was FUNNY! update asap!
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Reviewed By: Yenchna and Kentuski [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 17:19 CST
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OMI GOSH!!!!!!!!! Luv it!!!! Bandit Keith is such a preacher! It kicks butt! Allister and Kaiba sitting in a tree..... HA ha ha ha ha!!!! Can't stop laughing must breath.... *takes deep breath* Ok fine now... That was best paradoy I've read in quite some time. Keep it up!!! I look forward to reading more! Luv, Yenchna And Kentuksi
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Title: It just gets better and better...
Reviewed By: Inu-gi-oh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great. I have only one complaint. I think you should have messed around with Kaiba and Allistor for about say, eight more chappies. ^_^ Love your story though.
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Reviewed By: good one On: February 06, 2005 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an coolest story every man you have got to make more. you should make jonney steps in your next one. make more please. my e-mail is ldkfunk94@yahoo.com
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Title: I'm lovin it
Reviewed By: Inu-gi-oh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was funny. Please, I....need.....more [arms go out in front like a zombie]. Keep it up man, you rule.
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