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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Silent tears
Reviewed By: chels-so On: August 15, 2006 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i can't belive it. This is so far the best story i have ever read since i started to like read storys. i Laughed cried hell i even sang! Its was so breathe taking and creative. I can't even start to dicribe what i feel right now. Like when kagome died of the cancer i cryed thoughout the whole convertion of theirs. and i continued to cry untill the plane went donw or blow up then i started to sob. But the part that gets me is that kagome almost got her happy end then she died. But at the end he love came to her renuing the happy endding that never had a chance to happen and thats what i love about this story so much.
| Title: Took my breath away
Reviewed By: mylia_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has taken quite an expanse of time to read your story completely but it has been moments well spent. Your tale is skillfully written and utterly enjoyable. You used great imagery, had little to no grammatical errors, and continued a great flow of events throughout the story that easily propelled the story forward. I must admit that it often caused my emotions to spring from one extreme to the other with every titillating chapter It is obvious as to why you have so many reviews for the story. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work.
| Reviewed By: Catherine On: August 10, 2006 08:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know the rating probably seems a bit extreme but I enjoyed the story thoroughly and had no problems with it. Well, I don't enjoy the Kag + Sessh pairing so much but you've done it in a way that I can deal with. I do kind of like them in this version. "God, she wished she was in a story. If she were a character in a story, she might get it right for once. She was supposed to be good and strong, noble and kind, without doubt or sadness, but that was never how it had been." When you can write that/have a character think tha and have the reader not find it simply an amusing little tidbit then you have accomplished something great. Because even if it makes the reader stop and write this about that line, the reader is so absorbed in the story that it does have (at least) a measure of reality. And in this instance, it's very real. Being able to relate to characters so thoroughly, crying for them a few lines before (if you're me, at least) means there is something special about this story. For that whole part I was turning it over in my mind and wanting so badly to say "in real life there are happy endings, eventually she's BOUND to get a happy ending" but then I would come right back to the conclusion that it wasn't true. There are not always happy endings, there are no ways to ensure one or earn one, even if we think we have earned one. And I don't know, at this point, if you can refrain from -not- killing Kagome off. [Keep in mind, I was writing this before I got to the end] She could very easily die, a happy or even satisfactory ending is not ensured. So the times that they talk about her really dying are very real to me as well, because they are truth. Nothing says she has to still live. I know that she probably will die, and I don't know if I can handle it if she does... perhaps. And I believe that she won't... just, because. It seems so crazy that she would die, that you would kill her off, that you wouldn't, as a writer, stick something else in there that would prevent it, warp it--save her. Or that you haven't already done that somehow to ensure that she does. Or -she- hasn't :) So we'll see. Looking at the next line about her being a supporting character, I realize that when I'm watching movies/tv, or reading books and start to really fear for the main characters I take a little solace in the fact that the MAIN character will not die--they can't because then the movie/book would be over. But the other characters CAN die so that makes me anxious. But really, that's silly because a true writer has to [gah, I have no idea where I was going with this line because I didn't finish it. @_@] FRICKIN' CRAP. I forgot about his stupid bring-her-back-to-life sword! It's not like you even MENTIONED it in relation to Kagome even ONCE. Even HINTED. So no wonder. But I can't help feeling pretty dang stupid right now. I've just read the line "with a dagger in her throat" and I was like: :O with my mouth open and everything, frozen, shocked. Because, seriously, how's she supposed to come out of that? But then my mind clicked on and I was like: "DUH!" feeling stupid. And now I'm going to talk like a normal person again, without all the "and I was like's" and read the rest. And a little later... "for once she didn't do something stupid" YES. Okay. *grins* Much later... Didn't realize he could sleep in that state [beings sealed]. Interesting. I love how he starts romancing her once he gets out and you talk about how his plan was "lovingly revised" over all that time. That's nice. xD I was worried that once they finally had sex it might ruin them, instead of bringing them together, but after everything and being sealed the timing was perfect. Only one sex scene? How did you resist? ;) YAY that story rocked-you rock! Thanks for writing this I've got quite a few new words I'm going to be using from now on. I also copied a few quotes you used for the chapters. Actually, it was depressing toward the end, but the very end was alright. :/
| Reviewed By: Kat.Drav On: August 01, 2006 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, it's incredibly hard to express something you can't really understand. So, in an attempt of being not-boring, I'll just say one thing. Two words: Thank you. --Kat.
| Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: July 30, 2006 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely beautiful, you actually made me cry! It took me 2 days to read this, once I started I found it impossible to stop. From start to finish it flowed perfectly, and I'm not sure you could've perfected it any more. You have a great talent for writing which is very hard to find. I hope it is something you will pursue professionally. Thank you for the wonderful distraction.
| Reviewed By: millerha On: July 15, 2006 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a great story! I have always been a big fan of the Inuyasha series. I never thought of Kagome and Sesshoumaru as a pair but honestly I like the way they paired together. I lost a many a hour of sleep reading this. I just couldn't stop reading it! I cried at the end but I liked how you brought them back together at the end. You are such a great writer. PLEASE continue to write more storys!!! You have such a talent!!
| Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 13, 2006 19:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit that was such a good fic ur chapters are long but very very very entertaining. U really should be a writer you have such talent. I cried at all the sad parts I can't beleive Kagome died of cancer and Sesshomaru was all sad!!! And Sesshomaru died from a plain crash!!! But they were reunited so it all went well. Damnit though I wish you could write a prolouge(dont kno if i spelled that right) to this but it really wouldnt fit with the plot. DAMNIT!!! Your such an awsome author!!!! *sigh*
| Reviewed By: ~Cookie~ On: July 06, 2006 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is the best fan fic I have ever read in my life, Inuyasha or any other one. You have some serious talent that puts everyone else to shame. I really hope you become a writer when you grow up becausE I will seriously buy all your books
| Reviewed By: Ree_Revolution [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot even begin to convey to you how utterly amazing this story was, and I'm afraid that to try wouldn't bring my feelings justice. I am so glad to have found this, and to have read it - and to have enjoyed it to the point where words can no longer fully express my joy. And all that is left to say is thank you. For creating so amazing a work of art as this story. For inspiring, and for captivating. Thank you, so very, very much.
| Reviewed By: Lupi On: July 03, 2006 13:19 PDT
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I just wanted tosay this is probably the most well written fanficition i have ever come across and it made me cry...
| Title: Alora
Reviewed By: Alora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh lord I don't know if you'll read this or not but I'm just now getting up the guts to review. I finished reading your story the day after you finished it. I followed it from the beginning, waiting for each of them to come out and I always read them twice when they did, probably like every other fan that has had the fortune to read your story. I've read ALOT of InuYasha stories and this is by far my favorite. I got so caught up, it was like your words were a spider web and I was the fly. I even cried at the end I couldn't beleieve it. If a story is that emotionally moving it needs to go down in history. It would be so totally great if you started a new one but I guess I'll just wait and see. I just can't tell you enough. Like I said it was the BEST. I think I'll read it again and cry again too.
| Title: GREATNESS!!
Reviewed By: creaturesmint On: June 24, 2006 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh CRAP...Cripping, freaking, CRAP!!! Cripes!! (I loved it.) FRICKING FRECKING FREAK OUT!! You shocked me with that story...So GOOD, so SAD, you got past the things like their inablility to be together while everyone tried to kill them and ect., VERY nicely, and SO MUCH LOVE...!! *heart thumpheart thump* WONDERFUL! (And also, as a side note...the letters I had to enter in the spam filter, were: SPHM. That's FUNNY...XD)
| Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, the description of the fighting style and how Kazuo sounds makes him feel like Kenshin's mentor in Rurouni Kenshin. He's always got a bottle (or a jug) of Sake around, he says running and doging is better, and the style sounds just like the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryuu... Or at least a style that could evolve into it. Rather then detract from this piece these little nuggest just made me smile when I read it. I also found a great number of humerious lines to share with my friends, even if they're not fans of reading FanFictions, they can certainly find the humor in certain cercumstances. (Sorry for the HTML coding if it didn't turn out to work right)
| Reviewed By: Nightwine On: June 16, 2006 15:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I lost this fic awhile ago after my laptop died, and just found it again today. It has been my favourite fanfic ever, so incredibly well written, so very real. It ended up having even more meaning; I ended up getting to read up to the very end today, which is the last day I live in the state I grew up in in my parents house. Tomorrow I go to live in a state halfway across the country, in a place I don't really know. The biggest change of my life, and I'm excited and scared. Reading to the end of this today made it so special, like finding the end of it on today of all days helped me to wrap things up too. Thank you for such a wonderful, wonderful story.
| Reviewed By: KB On: June 15, 2006 00:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. that was the most... the best... god... i can't even explain it. i have never read such an amazing story. i cried at the end. PLEASE write more. Your adoring fan, KB
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