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Title: HI!
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you ALL TENS! X3 Your story is sooo cute! I really can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 08:20 CST
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This story is BANANAS! I have never laughed so at every chatper of any story I read before. Gaara being afraid of snow is soooooo cute. But I guess that's a given when you come from a desert village I think you should continue to write this story. I don't have any ideas for you yet but if I come up with any I'll email them to you or whatever.
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Reviewed By: demonpyro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For chapter 13 you could make one of the characters nearly drown(preferably Naruto). You could also make one of the babysitters save that character. Hope this help's you.
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Title: Three again
Reviewed By: demonpyro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For chapter 13 you could make one of the characters nearly drown(preferably Naruto). You could also make one of the babysitters save that character. Hope this help's you.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 03:44 CST
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awesome story. wonderfully funny. so what happens now? what about Orochimaru he had a plan right? How are they going to get fixed? Or are they going to age as they are and grow up again? Will they gain their memories? What happens then? What kind of reactions will happen? Why is Sasuke protective and jealous of Naruto and Gaara? They are calling Gaara a monster why Naruto? Isn't Naruto supposed to have the more stronger and terrifying demon? So Many qustions, now use them. lol.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 17:55 CST
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I may not have any idea for the story, But I say No to ending the story, I kinda want to the kids back to their right age. .....Though It look like I am the only reviewer on this site.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:58 CST
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Poor Shikamaru.....*Tried not to laugh* *Read the end...* Hehehe....I hope they get them back in soon...
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:50 CST
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So...they let Itachi go...Cool. *What happen to Atasuki*....HAhahahahha!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:41 CST
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*Laugh at what they did to the Plant man* *Glare evilly at the officials of Konoha* KILL!!!!!! KILL!!! *Watch what Itachi did* GOOD JOB, ITACHI!! THEY NEED TO PAY!!!! Oh great....all of the Atasuki are coming....
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:32 CST
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Gremlin Spots....BWHAHAHHAH!!!!!! *Look at what Itachi is doing*...O_o Itachi and the puppy dog eyes?...0_0 Does he have a mind of a three year old? Poor Shokubutsu.....
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:11 CST
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Smart move Hiashi! *Watchs as Neji kick the kitty and the what Orochimaru said*....BWAHAHH! *Read what happen to Neji* Poor Neji and What does he have?
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:08 CST
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...I was right. *Look at what they did to Kisame*....MUAHAHAHHHAHHA!!!!!!! Iiachi is a good guy now?....YAY!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 19:10 CST
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*Watch as they bury the bug*...*Snicker* Poor Kisame....NOT! Where are Gaara, Sasuke, Naruto, Hinata and Neji with the Ninja stuff? ...They not going to save Itachi are they?
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 18:52 CST
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Yay, Kankurou said he was sorry!(So did Gaara.) Ino, Anko, TenTen, Rin are back, Yay! *Read what Naruto did*....*Eye twitch*...BWhAHAHAHH!!!! Heheh, So Neji can still do the Byakugan. *Laughs at what happen to Itachi*
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 19:22 CST
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Hey.....Wait moment...When did Shikamaru come back to house? and when is Ino, Anko, TenTen, Rin going to show up again? ....Hm...I wonder what happen to Naruto...
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