| "Mind Links" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:24 CST
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A highly sulfuric bath... where did that come from? Just curious. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 17:02 CST
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LOVE IT! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:24 CST
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Er, that review made no sense, so I'll just say this, I really enjoy this story, and I think it's awesome, so you need to update soon! See, makes sense now, ne?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:22 CST
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Hm... that fangirl club sounds familiar... do you read Fruits Basket? I can guess where the heart-throb of Keiko's school is from - Naruto. Heh, I was just thinking, okay... Yes! It's Friday, I'm allowed to ramble and/or be random. Even if it is in a review to an author who I admire. Okay! I have a question, how is it you make Youko seem so natural? Is it that you use action instead of just dialog? Every time I try writing him and Shuichi, it turns out horribly. And now I was driven to the point of insanity by it... *runs around singing a never-ending song* Okay, I'll quit now... but I need to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was a little funnier than the last two. The bickering and teasing is so enjoyable. I love how your subtly easing into a greater relationship between Kurama and Keiko. Well done, thank you. Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFL. Oh this just keeps getting better. I love your fics. In fact a lot of the fics you've written are on my favorites list. Your humor just kills. Keep it up. I can't get enough. LOL. I anticipate your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this fic is very intriguing and amusing. I love the banter between Shuichi and Youko and the way Youko starts to tease Keiko when he relizes she is the one they're linked to. It's great! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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