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Title: ravenstarfire89
Reviewed By: ravenstarfire89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! You up-dated! I'm happy now, I was having a bad day and now I feel better. I really like this new chapter... And the plot thickens... I've always wanted to say that.... don't mind me....
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Wolf_Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 14:43 CDT
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you don't update as often here as u do on AFF, do you? Great story, hope to see more!!!!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh...me likey! update soon!
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 05:53 CST
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update soon, please! o_o i want to read the next chapter, as your writings are addictive!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 19:02 CST
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THE LAST ONE IS SO SAD, yUSUKE IS SO MISUNDERSTOOD. uPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 10:45 CST
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It makes sense, the parting of ways with Yusuke. Rather sad actually. So! What next? Youko can drag them into his dreams, and they can't really do anything about it... unless they both develop insomniac habits. Youko must be happy with that... or maybe he isn't, as his time is limited. Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Ragamuffin On: February 14, 2005 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful... embarrassed to say i actually enjoyed it... but I did; and considering i'm a normally conservative girl, that's saying a lot. Again, as before mentioned, I love the teasing of Youko as does almost everyone. O_o I also enjoyed the fact that the mind reading is getting deeper... almost don't want it to end. Once again I applaud you. Please continue it. I've been checking back since it was posted and can't wait until the next chapter or the chapter after that... or the chapter after that etc ^_~ Anywho, good show, greatly enjoyable. *golf clap*
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE AGAIN!UPDATE AGAIN! MUST SEE MORE.... UPDATE AGAIN!UPDATE AGAIN! PWEASE!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:24 CST
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A highly sulfuric bath... where did that come from? Just curious. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 17:02 CST
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LOVE IT! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:24 CST
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Er, that review made no sense, so I'll just say this, I really enjoy this story, and I think it's awesome, so you need to update soon! See, makes sense now, ne?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:22 CST
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Hm... that fangirl club sounds familiar... do you read Fruits Basket? I can guess where the heart-throb of Keiko's school is from - Naruto. Heh, I was just thinking, okay... Yes! It's Friday, I'm allowed to ramble and/or be random. Even if it is in a review to an author who I admire. Okay! I have a question, how is it you make Youko seem so natural? Is it that you use action instead of just dialog? Every time I try writing him and Shuichi, it turns out horribly. And now I was driven to the point of insanity by it... *runs around singing a never-ending song* Okay, I'll quit now... but I need to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was a little funnier than the last two. The bickering and teasing is so enjoyable. I love how your subtly easing into a greater relationship between Kurama and Keiko. Well done, thank you. Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFL. Oh this just keeps getting better. I love your fics. In fact a lot of the fics you've written are on my favorites list. Your humor just kills. Keep it up. I can't get enough. LOL. I anticipate your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this fic is very intriguing and amusing. I love the banter between Shuichi and Youko and the way Youko starts to tease Keiko when he relizes she is the one they're linked to. It's great! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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