| "Beneficial Love" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good so far, I really enjoyed it. You should type more in future chapters and such, you need some work on explaining things more slowly and clearly before going right to the point of things. I'm not flaming but I'm a little concerned about my fellow writers and their woeks when I read them. Never waste a good story when writen. Anyway, UPDATE PLEASE!!! Oh, and I definitely think it was Kurama, Shippo-chan doesn't have red hair... it's more orange then red! :-) *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: Night Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I like this story! continue! please? well, its either Shippo or Kurama. please continue! i am looking foreward to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nana73blue On: February 09, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I luv ur story hope u update soon oh and its kurama of course
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Reviewed By: Nana73blue On: February 09, 2005 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I luv ur story hope u update soon oh and its kurama of course
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Reviewed By: Celestial Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It could either be Shippo or Kurama! But keep on going! Update soon
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yey yey yey i luv the new story pleaz update a new chappie 2 ^-^ sayonara neko-chan :3 inuyasha is an ass in this story oh ya and the green eyes are kuramaz eyes
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