"Blood, Sweat, Candlelight & Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 13:02 CST Comment/Review: I love your writing style, you know. I adore it. The Alt. Pairing doesn't bother me a'tall, probably since I'm not a DB watcher! Great chapter! More! More! More!!!
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 18:44 CST Comment/Review: I buy it! I'm very fond of the whole rival/object of desire scenario. You should make this a longer fic--but I do like the drama of the vignette. I know Goku's hard to write. Tell me about it. It can be done, though--man LisaB did such a great job in "And Then There Were Three" dealing with the Vegeta lusts for Goku thing. I'd like to see your take on that scenario in another fic... Nice drabble.
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