| "A MiSTing of Scoring on Your Own Team" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 22:41 CDT
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Just wait until you read the ending of DEJA VU. Which will be coming soon after a few more chapters! *grin* |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Okay... Now I know why I skipped chapter 2 for good reasons. But chapter 3 is still contains what the original fic was about. Ick! Well, I guess I brought this all upon myself as I read the third and hopefully final MST lemon. DUH, I've should known... its NC-17 for a reason! Only your excellent MST skills made this chapter pretty much humorous to get through other than making me nauseous if it were the orinal unMST version. Great work.
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaden: Man Brian you've got bigger balls than anyone i know to read something like this and MiST it.
Jenrya: CROW!
CROW: What?
Jenrya: Sorry habit... KADEN!
Kaden: What? All I said was Brian's got bigger... oh shit! *blushes* |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! ...even if it is a MST of a potential hentai fic which is later on. It is a bit crowded in the theatre with loads of hilarious dialogue. I had to go through it twice. Too bad I cannot continue on, but with you MST skills it wont be... too bad. I'll check on it soom time.
~ Jodi S.
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Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: January 16, 2002 23:26 CST
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Hey, cool! Man. Had me be part of an incest/cross-breeding, but then, what else could I possibly expect from you?
Funny MST! All the funnier for having me and my friends in it. Yay!
Great chapter, btw. All that TG stuff was hilarious. |
Reviewed By: TG On: January 12, 2002 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BROVO! BROVO!
TG:THAT WAS SO ME!!!!I THOUGHT IT WAS PUUURRRRFECT!
I was in such the worst mood and reading this made me smile for the first time since monday.
Thank you Brian for finishing chapter two...NOW HURRY WITH THE REST PLEASE @@
Laterz~TG |
Reviewed By: SSJ5 Majin ajrkota On: January 12, 2002 10:05 CST
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Okay, that was VEEEERRRRYYYYYY strange..... |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: January 11, 2002 20:14 CST
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Hehehe that was pretty hilarious... AHAHAHAHA sorry it's still funny. The thing with TG was like the best part hehehe....actually all of the little comments were funny..ahahaha |
Reviewed By: Darkstar On: January 10, 2002 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um.........why'd you do that!? That's my fic you're MSTing, and you didn't even bother to read the rest of the series........bum.........see if I let you MST another one of my fics.............. |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: January 09, 2002 15:25 CST
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nice misting... but you could you have found a WORSE LEMON TO USE!!!! GEEZE MAN... I CANT BELIEVE YOU.... REMIND TO GET A VOODOO DOLL OF 007 AND GIVE IT LOTS OF PAIN.. IN THE HEAD.. *LOOKS AT CROW* NOT THAT HEAD HENTAI BREATH!... *calms down* now i know how TG felt when she saw tai and kari gettin it on.... but still remind to kill 007... *imitates hank hill* the boy aint right... i think ive said enough |
Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2002 14:27 CST
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first fo all... take your time with part 3. remember, i said that. second, this was funny (i skipp the fic mostly and go for the riffs. smart, ne?) finally, it's a good thing DS doesn't review or read reviews otehrwise some of us would be in deeeeeep trouble |
Reviewed By: The DJ Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 thing i'll say is that it is a good fic. For te overall, i avreged the other 4. I really dont like the original (save a couple of chapters and the action [CROW! NOT THAT!] parts) and this is good.
The DJ Jester |
Reviewed By: R80 On: October 31, 2001 18:22 CST
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You already know how i feel about all of this. But, i will add this... when we go back into teh theater, very few of us will come bakc out alove... hehehehehe |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: October 31, 2001 18:33 CST
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HIIII!!!! heheeh that was hillarious!!!! ahahahahahahaah |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: October 31, 2001 23:11 CST
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HEEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEheeheeheeheeee.... oh, man, that was GREAT. Heh... amazing Teeg hasn't killed ya! But then, TG is TG, so ya never know. ANYWAYS, that was totally awesome and hilarious! So so sooo funny... I love your introduction of me, that was great. Heeheehee... ooh, boy. Did this thing not have lemony-goodness, I'd definitely be bouncing off the walls to put it up on my site. Still a great ficcy, though. Can't wait to read more! Or even just the same stuff again, heh... heeheeheeheehee.... |
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