| "One on One" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: one on one
Reviewed By: firestar712 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awsome u should write more one shot lemons or make more chapters to this story u r awsome at writing keep it up
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Reviewed By: keisha On: May 31, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update one on one soon
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Title: One On One
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: myself
Reviewed By: Fan fic expert On: April 01, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words cannot EXPRESS how good that was. that was better than one i've read with more than one chapter to fill. WONDERFUL!!! *whispering*great lemon. :) :) :)hee hee! that was cute. InuYasha playing basketball. Two words: TOO HOTTT!! *droolling.* Oh GOD HE'S HOTTT!!! Damn i'm sooo jelous of kagome.
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Title: myself
Reviewed By: Fan fic expert On: April 01, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words cannot EXPRESS how good that was. that was better than one i've read with more than one chapter to fill. WONDERFUL!!! *whispering*great lemon. :) :) :)hee hee! that was cute. InuYasha playing basketball. Two words: TOO HOTTT!! *droolling.* Oh GOD HE'S HOTTT!!! Damn i'm sooo jelous of kagome.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [not logged in. sorry] On: February 28, 2005 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DAYUMMMMMMMMM!!! That was a great story. hope to read more of yours. Great plot cute and hot. Ballers = HOT HOT HOT! yay! Inuyashaaa =) haha i'm so hyper d: 10/10 of course!!!1 loveddd it! =) yep n e ways i'm faving this and yupp! keep up the great work!
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Inuyasha0313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to thank all of you who have reviewed! I have another hentai that I'm writing a sequel to and after I get it done I'm going to start on this one...again, thank you all!
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Title: wow.........
Reviewed By: bloomluvrchick On: February 15, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow........I think there should be another chapter. It's kinda sweet how you made the story.
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Reviewed By: :-P On: February 14, 2005 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good! Very tasteful.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn! this would make an AWESOME chappie fic! if you have time, plz make a CHAPPIE fic sequel!
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Reviewed By: Laurachan On: February 13, 2005 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting and original plot! ^^ The lemon was okay, just try to make it more detailed... but I liked the story, so keep on writing please ^^
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: February 13, 2005 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowwee! Nice lemon. You are good at writing lemon so I really hope you write more in the near future. Looking forward to it. Ja~
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!! GRAET STORY
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 02:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Sweet Jesu!!! Whhoooooowwwhhheee!! Yummy. Absolutely yummy. Okay, I'm done. WHEW!
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