| "Sengoku Jidai University" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: Sengoku Jidai University
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 19:54 CDT
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Holy crap, you're such a hardcore! An update AND replies to your reviews! o.0 That's crazy..I like the way you introduced Shippo into the story. I'm sure we wont ever see that again...except in that Tai freak's plagarized story. Anyways, I can barely wait for the lemon(s) ^^ Now to find that Tia chick and flame her..............
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 14, 2005 18:55 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Definately an interesting way of having Kagome find out his secret not to mention having he and Kagome grow closer...at leave from her side. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha will react to the next 'addition' and especially when his ramen is being given away... I do now have a slight suspicion about what exactly it is that Inuyasha is doing, not entirely sure yet but I have a theory at least. Look forwards to the next update, I'm sure The Centre will do brilliantly in the awards. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: kool Fic
Reviewed By: Arina On: May 14, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic i hope you can update soon. love the shippo idea.KKouga is really gonna get it when inu stands up for kagome!!.......cant wait!!
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Title: You are a genius writer!
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i deciding to read the first chapter, i was shocked at how many reviews you got so i thought, hey! you must be really good if you have that many reviews. and you are!!! i cant wait for the next update keep it up. dont leave us hanging!!!!
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 14, 2005 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, great so far, but Kouga seems a little to pushy (even for him), I mean with him convincing everyone that Kagome is her mate... and still Inuyasha hasn't heard about it. But, heh, those are just small details. Just keep updating!
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Reviewed By: sskglsls On: May 11, 2005 03:30 CDT
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lol... very good update! i'm excited for more!!! :P
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Reviewed By: Rhiara On: May 11, 2005 00:49 CDT
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LOVED IT!! Update soon, don't leave us hanging!
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 07, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH!!!You are a genius!!Can only find 3rd chap here.And I say."LOVE it!!"-This story is so great!Perfection!!I found 3rd chap to move smoothly and you're right it didn't need any spicing.I love how you left the destruction of Hinten/Manten to the readers imagination.PREFECT!!Sometimes not writing out a scene is just what is needed.The reader can fill in their own delicious details.(evil smirk)I wonder what Inu is going to do with the car.-Evil Laugh insert-I loved the Ramen for Protection!!Please keep up the most excellent work.Inu hanyou Nikkie chases her tail in circles yapping with glee.Update as you can.Remember prefection can never be rushed-so don't push yourself.
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 02:29 CDT
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Lovely Lovely! IM glad to read yet another Exciting chapter! I knew you wouldnt let me down hope the next update wont take so long! Good luck writing!
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Reviewed By: Dustychic On: May 06, 2005 23:21 CDT
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I l-u-v-e-d your story it was off the chain ^_^. I needed something to make me laugh and your story did just that. I'm such a weirdo sometimes I'm probably the only one who laughed at the joke about Kaede's old run/broke down computer ^ ~ LOL. I think this story is tight, but one thing homie - Remember your timeline or it will upset the whole story. Think about it… If Inuyasha really was sealed to the tree decades ago would he really know about internet compatibility? But remember its your story and I really am not trying to be a smart butt. Its your story, your life, your world, I'm just a squirrel trying to get a nut ^_^. Update soon and I'll bug you with another review.
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: May 06, 2005 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I like the center as well, but this one has really sucked me in! I can't wait to see where you'll go with it! Ps thank God there is no way to marry someone with out their concent! that would be bad.
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Title: Sengoku Jidai University
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 22:25 CDT
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That was a bit slow but definitely better than what I would make it sound like...I love the parts you tossed in with the ramen, the essay on Sess, and the Porche. I can barely wait for the next chapter but as long as you make it worth the wait, I'm sure I'll be happy enough to just shut up and sit here^^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 05, 2005 17:19 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Glad to see the thunder brothers passing went quietly, those two were always such a pain... Ramen for protection...that's a new one. Interesting way of getting the two of them to continue to get closer...I can't help but wonder if Kagome will be going home alone... Look forwards to seeing what happens next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:36 CDT
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So what's a girl to do? She can't return the car until after the holidays so it would be understandable,but so very, very wrong, to use it during vacation. Inuyasha sure seems to spend a lot of time hanging out with the humans. Doesn't het get grief for that?
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 05, 2005 09:39 CDT
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great job! i'm so glad you've updated. i love this fic!
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