| "To What Does Love Owe?" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jodie On: March 08, 2002 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love this one. The part i love the most is the fight there going to have, so please if you could finish, i really wanna know whta happen |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey whats weakling going to do? And why is Dr. Briefes letting him creat some sick plot if he knows he been cheating on her? Whats gonna happen? Any whys I like so please continue |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 23, 2002 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He was soo close. If Vegeta went any futher I would bet that he would literally kill Goku. Talk about being in the wrong place at the wrong time. I can't wait to see waht happens. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
poor veggies, lol! that was wicked cool. i feel sorry to goku--is he going to get his ass kicked? he ought to. i can't believe he just came out of nowhere and interrupted them like that. lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 22, 2002 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NONONONO! You cliffhanged just before a lemon! I need to read the rest. That is ssoooo cruel. Please update before I lose it. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEP!!! do you know how many heart attacks you've probably caused throught the internet? *heheh* very good fic, please finish it! :) |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
haha i can't believe you left me hanging on the brink of a lemon!!! :)
it's great so far :) makes me want to hang yamucha and dr. breifs...
so inconsiderate...tsk tsk :) geez vegeta is hot...! |
Reviewed By: Kiya On: December 05, 2001 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Muh sista! j00 gots j0 self a pitty good fic, but j00 gots to get up off j0 arse and write mo chapters! Lemon = good, now write it! Lmao. I would hope j00 know who it is by now. I'll give you a hint, I gots j0 purple panties!...still... Lol. I love j00 dood, buh bye now! |
Reviewed By: Kiya On: December 05, 2001 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Muh sista! j00 gots j0 self a pitty good fic, but j00 gots to get up off j0 arse and write mo chapters! Lemon = good, now write it! Lmao. I would hope j00 know who it is by now. I'll give you a hint, I gots j0 purple panties!...still... Lol. I love j00 dood, buh bye now!Font Color |
Reviewed By: Amanda. :x On: November 24, 2001 10:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That was -- wow. :x!! I really wish you'd finish it though -- e_e; For all of you who roleplay an' such, my character ish Juuhachi -- and she recently had her own lil' fling with the Ouji No Kawainess. Ahh -- well. I am just here to morally congradulate you -- this was very very very very good. =D Well -- post me when you get a new chapter, ne? I'll be contacted at, 'ChouJuuhachi@aol.com' -- e-mail me when you get the chance. n_n Jaa! |
Reviewed By: Amanda. :x On: November 24, 2001 10:07 CST
Comment/Review:
That was -- wow. :x!! I really wish you'd finish it though -- e_e; For all of you who roleplay an' such, my character ish Juuhachi -- and she recently had her own lil' fling with the Ouji No Kawainess. Ahh -- well. I am just here to morally congradulate you -- this was very very very very good. =D Well -- post me when you get a new chapter, ne? I'll be contacted at, 'ChouJuuhachi@aol.com' -- e-mail me when you get the chance. n_n Jaa! |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love yout fic. It's good to read v/b fics where Bulma and Vegeta are actually associating with each other in a civil way. I think it is so cute how they are acting. And don't even think that Vegeta is out of character; like you said--and I firmly believe this too--we don't know what goes on behind closed doors. But let's face it: it's obvious by the way Vegeta is that he won't be romancing her like humans do, but who's to say he's always mean and detached? Just sex alone wouldn't keep them in a relationship together for so long. There had to be more than that. And I doubt Bulma would stay with him if he was such an asshole even when they are alone. So, good fic! I totally love what you're doing.
~ Vegge's Mate |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 06, 2001 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic so far. More chapters please. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 08, 2001 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is nice in the respect that Bulma nad Vegeta seem to actually be developing* a relationship... (In a cute way, too!) Usually, you see the one-night, quick, no reason, blind love/passion fics... But this one seems to build playfully. Pretty good writing. Wanna see more.
G.S.-over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: cherry52 On: November 18, 2001 02:09 CST
Comment/Review:
your story is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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