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Reviewed By: Nara M On: February 14, 2005 17:50 CST
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Wow, your story are so, kawaii Hiei and Kurama and my favorite lovely foxy Youkie (Youko). I would love to read your next chapies. Especially my favorite foxy. Updated soon K?
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Reviewed By: Janie Jame On: February 14, 2005 17:46 CST
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Hey they girl, friend of mine told you need suport. You know I don't like writing, but I like your story. Short and long are both fine with me. Keep up the good work girl. Tat right about you writing short story, but alway remember to write a littlr bit long K?
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Reviewed By: Nikki Mar On: February 14, 2005 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey nice story. Love it, my friend say you need something, so here I am. Don''t take me seriously, but I like your story longer. Just a suggestion K? Don't blame Tatsuki she nice, updated soon so I could read your other chap K? I like chibi Hiei just adorable.
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:27 CST
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Great job on the new chapter, short but great detail though. I love it, love it. How can someone hate. Don't worry. I know you will try your best. Good luck on your next chapter K? Updated soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: iluvshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, but if you could write bigger chapters, that would greatly appreciated.
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 17:41 CST
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Funny, but short and it very much in a good way. Hope to read your next chapies. Funny, very funny. Updated your next story soon k?
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