| "Lovers Island" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: amfairy_2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE evrything by A-Man. It was so awesome nd hillarious i fell out of my chair. i've printed all ur hentai stories, AMan, just remember: i'm ur biggest fan! it rocks.
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Reviewed By: 092 On: March 05, 2002 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I'm a perv for the most part, i enjoyed this ff just 'cuz it has alot of lemons in it |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223(mediaminermember who isn't logged in right now) On: February 26, 2002 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a daikari to be honest but this is one of the few I have enjoyed. Sapphire_Goddess has a very good point about the paragraphs and I do agree with that. But you do have a good fic going and I hope you add to it very very soon. |
Reviewed By: Sapphire Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot, except for the way you don't at least start a new line for every speaker, as it tends to get annoying reading the large paragraphs with sometimes three to four different speaking. Other than that, I like this fic a lot because you don't bash Davis (God I hate Takari fans who do that!!), and it's cool that you made this into a Daikari, which is one hetersexual couple I don't mind |
Reviewed By: Sinister Slayer On: December 21, 2001 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, It is a great fic. R80, why do people care about couplings? I enjoy all fic except Takari's because Half of them are Davisturnsevil or Davisbashing. I'm sorta sick of them, god knows how long it will last. If this is ever discontinued, I will hunt you down. |
Reviewed By: Oz_Overide On: June 22, 2002 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, Your ff is was awsome! After the first chapter, I couldnt stop reading it! Write more. HURRY! |
Reviewed By: dream-chan On: November 02, 2001 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
just wanted to let you know that I have read this fic somewhere else, and i must say that i'm quite enjoyed it (although being a daikari fan might have something to do with it too!) Anyway, GREAT job and nice twist with the TakeruxJun relationship
ja ne |
Reviewed By: R80 On: November 17, 2001 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
When i first read this series, i expected a Takari all teh way... boy, was i wrong. No offense, but daikari isn't my thing. In the future, please try to give better warning about these things. As for your review in Cheaters, you'll have to wait to see what develops. meanwhile, check out some of my otehr lemons on here or FF.net |
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