"Mischievous Digimon and Chocolate" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Mistystoy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 11:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah. Writers block sucks. I liked the story, and the "big scene" with Kari and Davis got me going, but you might want to work on how you write. I had trouble figuring out who was talking.
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Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 16:35 CDT Comment/Review: that was good. pleasr continue. what happens to them? |
Reviewed By: digidudecool [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2002 12:21 CDT Comment/Review: Continue it PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 11:47 CDT Comment/Review: ok this is a great story and all but you shouldn't make people leave a review or else you won't continue. so what if you don't get alot of reviews. i've only gotten two reviews total both my things. so what and for those who actually do like your story you should write it for them and for yourself not because you got so many reviews and this isn't a threatening thing so don't "make all your things go bye-bye". i'm just telling you something you need to hear. and that goes for all authors who does that. like i said though your story is good and i do hope you continue it with your certain amount of reviews you want or without them. the only one your hurting by not continuing is yourself and your writing talents. |
Reviewed By: Psycopath On: June 01, 2002 17:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: good fic, iand i will KILL you if you dont add a sequel |
Reviewed By: Grahf 52 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 17:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: rad story dude make another one |
Reviewed By: john On: May 12, 2002 15:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is one kick ass story and PLZZZZZ make the sequel!!!! |
Reviewed By: darklord On: May 07, 2002 20:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i just love the story |
Reviewed By: dudette On: May 26, 2002 12:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NICE FANFIC!!! MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!! |
Reviewed By: D-Kong On: November 19, 2001 09:27 CST Comment/Review: That was really goood. Continue the story. |