| "The Price They Paid" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 11, 2005 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was an amazing and long chapter! Go you! Please update as soon as possible. It's really good and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm glad Duo and Heero finally got to see each other again, but I wish they would have gotten more quality time.
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Title: Track and Field
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 22:33 CDT
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I'm always a sucker for seeing the good guys one-up the jerks, and this chapter gave it to 'em by the buckets full. There are some interesting options for the boys, it's good to see that they're taking a proactive approach and not just sitting around marking the days off on a calendar. It would be nice if the scape goat idea works. I loved the "teamwork" course; Wufei can sure put you in your place with a few choice words, huh? I wonder how long the lesson will stick though... A nervous Heero - too cute! I'm nervous about him working with adults, though (even if he runs circles around them!) So, what does Quatre have up his sleeve now? I take it he set that all up?
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! They'll be together again! This was a cool and sweet chapter and I hope you update soon cause I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 19:58 CDT
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Finally the soccer jerks got what they were asking for! And Heero is getting more talkitive by the minute. Wow. He even get to cut grass with a scythe, wish I could, gotta love hacking things to pieces :). P.S. Update ASAP, or I shall hunt you down with my very own scythe, Muahaha. I'm feeling evil all of a sudden.
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Reviewed By: Rude02(notsignedin) On: April 27, 2005 19:34 CDT
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Yep... That was good strategy alover the place! Wu tricking his way into Heero's pen (even if the dufus forgot about the list), Duo getting rid of that moron principal at school! Most admit I tought he was gonna get locked up for the MS stunt. Goody!
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 14:24 CDT
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Poor Duo. He's having such a hard time, and all he wants to do is see Heero. And Heero, he needs to be a little more careful with hiding his identity, people are getting suspicious.Well, keep up the good work and update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was great! Please keep going! There was nothing wrong with it. I like that you made Duo and Heero go through the same kind of things. I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this. It really is an awesome fic (if my opinion counts for anything).
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 13:31 CDT
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Must have more. Heero taking the blame for poor Pete is so heroic! (hehe bad pun) But he certainly got the best of that bastard Clark. Keep going, it's getting better by the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rude02 _not signed in On: April 10, 2005 20:55 CDT
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AaaUch! Nice development, I like it! Wonder what will become of Heero after a year... so far, so interesting... check for typos, you got a few.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is great! Please keep going! I like how everyone overreacted about Heero getting beaten. Very cool!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the rest of the chapters -- excellent work! I love the fact that in this environment Heero seems able to talk and smile more, even when being a hero.
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:01 CST
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This chapter certainly made up for that evil cliffie. I must have more. And I think it's really cool how you know so much about the outdoors and the whole radio communications. Keep up the great work, and of course update as soon as you possibly can
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Reviewed By: Rude02 -not signed in- On: March 27, 2005 19:30 CST
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You really know a lot about outdoor stuff! Heero being caried... so cute! but herm... the DA or whom ever sent him to prison, wouldn't recognize him?
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Title: The price They Paid
Reviewed By: MANS On: March 27, 2005 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! This fanic is really cool Its the most original and different take on the aftermath of ac197 gundam wing world Also its great to see the guys doing something normal and seeing how they react to it Keep up the good work-and update asap pls! take care mans
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:08 CST
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I'm enjoying this fic so far. It makes sense that Heero would arrange to take the fall - he could condition himself to endure the sentence better than any of the others. Trowa would be my second choice. It's bittersweet how you depict scenarios and show how Heero and the boys handle very similar situations in very different environments. I'm anxious to see what becomes of Heero in the fire and if the outcome will be positive or negative against his sentence. Nice work so far Kiddo!
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