| "Broken Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz (too lazy to log in) On: March 19, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, hey...come write more x) you write more and I'll write more eh...
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Reviewed By: Mileniua [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 06:48 CST
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Really good start!
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 23:27 CST
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This didn't suck. It actually caught my attention I can't wait till next chapter! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really want to see all the next chapters!! they're great!!
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 00:06 CST
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No I don't hate you I just hate that you left it at that! How could you leave me all worked up! Come on you gotta update soon! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 23:09 CST
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LOl It's funny seeing that Yugi is still trying to figure out if he's gay or not! I love seeing him squirm once in a while ^_^. Well take good care and please update soon! I'll be looking forward to it! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:02 CST
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he shook that sexy ass at Yugi -hot- do i smell Kaiba blackmailing Yugi in the future...maybe possibly? please update when possible
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Reviewed By: Motje (i'm lazy) On: February 26, 2005 19:04 CST
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The whole Kaiba deal went a bit to fast if you ask me, but then again Kaiba is a smartass, so he'd figure it out in no time eventually. I'm slowly starting to feel more and more saddened about Yami slowly getting his memorie back so slow. If I'd had been the person I loved, I would slowly go insane. And I really love how Yuugi's struggling wiht his sexuality. Ver nice
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:12 CST
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You got my tumbs up :)
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 00:39 CST
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you review for me and now I review for you. See I'm returning the comments xD o.O Yeah...okay - great story! It's so cute. Dang I wanna take care of Yami too lol
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Reviewed By: Motje (lazy) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 16:09 CST
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Yummy, marshmellows.. However I'm loving it so far :)
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Reviewed By: Tamlin who isn't logged on On: February 18, 2005 21:34 CST
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I really can't diagnose the problem, but here's what I've found works for me. First, between every paragraph, double space. For some reason the spacing between paragraphs has been deleted with mediaminer's change in servers, so you have to do the spacing yourself. I have yet to get it to keep the indents, so I have just eliminated them. Second, save your work as a .doc. The formatting won't be great, but it'll be better and your readers won't be tearing their hair out in fustration. If you still have problems let me know and I'll see what I can come up with.
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Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 11:53 CST
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Wow!! I love it it's great and so well though out. I would love for you to continue. I can't wait until the next update! Ja ne!
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Title: Dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Keep it up.
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Title: This is great!
Reviewed By: Sayge On: February 17, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great! Please update soon! I really wanna see the next chapters!
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