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Reviewed By: phalon (not signed in) On: February 25, 2005 16:47 CST
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LOL. Nice ending to that chapter. Great story so far, UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Captivating Beginning
Reviewed By: InuyashaFanDude On: February 25, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The beginning of this story is so good. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome develops. There is only a bit of similarity with Hana Yori Dango (Meteor Garden) in the way you describe the four richest kids. But I'm sure this is going to be very creative and I won't mind even if elements from Hana Yori Dango will be present. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you have time. I hope you have longer chapters but if thats your style, hey its all good. Kudos and Praises!!!
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Title: Captivating Beginning
Reviewed By: InuyashaFanDude On: February 25, 2005 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The beginning of this story is so good. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome develops. There is only a bit of similarity with Hana Yori Dango (Meteor Garden) in the way you describe the four richest kids. But I'm sure this is going to be very creative and I won't mind even if elements from Hana Yori Dango will be present. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you have time. I hope you have longer chapters but if thats your style, hey its all good. Kudos and Praises!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
lmao that is just getting funnier by the moment keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 24, 2005 21:12 CST
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there were alot of grammer mistakes in this chapter but it's ok.... i don't mind! it's such a good story! please update soooonnnn!!!!!!!!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: February 21, 2005 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story so please update really soon!!!!!!! The only thing i ask though is for longer chappies...if you would be so kind? I'm a writer myself so i know that i don't like being told what to do without a 'please'. well anyway, like i wrote before update soon pwetty please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 18, 2005 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! that was fast! thanks! update soon! and maybe a longer chapter....?
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Reviewed By: greensleeves On: February 18, 2005 11:43 CST
Comment/Review:
"kikyou it's over, bye"? that's cold. i wish my boyfriend would do that to me. you know, if i had had a boyfriend that is
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (wtf i was signed in!) On: February 17, 2005 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he just broke it off like that? wow wellkeep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: NIce man nice!
Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It's realy awsome! I hope you keep updating. I can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON PUH~LEESE!
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Title: creative
Reviewed By: krity_kat On: February 17, 2005 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is pretty good! There are only a few mistakes but thats not a problem cause it's easy to tell what you mean so keep writing! oh and i have no idea how much a yen is worth sorry:P but 300,000 yen sounds like a lot to me. My sister says its less than a dollar but she doesnt know for sure. It's freaking cold here right now!!! and snowing *shivers* ill review next time i read! buh bi!
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Title: Good start!
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (to lazy to login) On: February 17, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
whaaaa ik like this ficcie ^^ your way to hyper to put down: REVIIIEUWWWW haha ^^ i like it. But demand longer chapters from you :P well hope you update soon, bubai K!$$ ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: angel15025 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your4 story. i can't wait to read more. you have a good beginning. i wish i could help you with the yen thing, but all i know about it is you buy stuff with it. good luck though!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:39 CST
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i'll give you a dollar if you update by tomarrow! i love this plot... but the chapter was shortish... not that mine aren't but that's ok cause it's good! (Yours i mean). please update asap!!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice backround info on Kagome and sry i couldn't tell you bout yen but if it were chineese then i could get me cousin to! (she lives in China) and it's kool you live in hawaii i have yet to live other then the state of michigan! well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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